Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Kym,

Firstly, thank you for thanking me for leading the club. You did a wonderful job with your entry. Nature is angry and we are to blame. Global warming is a real thing that many people in government deny. We are having a tropical storm, Hilary, that is flooding many cities. I'am okay thus far.

well done!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you Marival, please take care, I am watching these events in your area (news), as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Sad, but so true. Unfortunately, some tend to ignore alarms. Until it's too late. This is an excellent response to the club challenge. Perfect artwork to highlight your words.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you very much, yes, it is sad, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Climate Ignites, has the proper formatting and demands attention as the long warned of destruction of the planet by unaddressed climate-change forces has arrived.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Paul Manton

Exceptional

Hello Kahpot. A great 5-6-5 haiku, perfectly formatted on a very important subject. Excellent opening and satori - very well chosen words.

The picture of the forest wildfire is intimidating - we can feel the heat ourselves - and the opening line, 'the CLIMATE ignites' is a powerful metonymy. Very accomplished. The result of global warming is indeed worldwide devastation - and that should wake up every one of us, as your satori tells us.

I am so impressed with this that I will give it six stars. Thank you.
Paul

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you so very much, there are so many disasters happening all over the world, we do need to wake up, and contribute, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by Paul Manton on 22-Aug-2023

Thanks, kahpot

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your haiku poem - excellent picture presentation- good syllable count and connection between lines- theme reminds - Daughter in a Hurricane in California and my son in Canada with forest on fire- worldwide deviation one billion year away when the sun expands to consume the earth - poem makes a good observation ! Good poem for the challenge! Bless AP

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you AP. I am seeing the terrible fires and hurricanes in your area, take care, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You're so right. We should all pay attention to this "alarm bell." There are too many bizarre climate conditions and we all need to make some changes to stop the destruction. Great job with your haiku.

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 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you so very much, yes, we do need to try harder, that alarm has been ringing for quite sometime, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

If only the masses would listen to what the world is telling them. Things are changing and if we don't get on board and do better it will all come to a crashing halt.


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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you for your wonderful and understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot