Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Exceptional

Absolutely hilarious! Love it and that amazing skill and sense of humour of yours that captures the scene in the image so perfectly. I could read a book of your limericks, Rachelle, especially on this theme! Ever thought of it? Still laughing! Good luck! Debbie x

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Omg. YOU're the one who's hilarious. Thank you for this resounding review that touches both my heart and my funny bone. xoxox

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly liked your creative rhymes.
I could relate to this because we have people in our family like those girls. Best wishes!Alexandra

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

I'm pretty sure EVERYONE has someone like those girls in their family! Thanks for the very nice review. xo

Comment from GregoryCody

Exceptional

Grandadda. Love it. Your flow is unique, smooth, pulls you along. Wait. This was a stacked limerick! Whoa!! You pulled it off SO WELL. SERIOUSLY. I usually think these are novelty, etc. No way, Awesome.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thanks very much, Greg. xo

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh dear, so the managed to spend all the money all the time taking advantage of Granddad's. Good job they are shipped off to Montana, and everyone can sleep in piece once again. Good luck with this fun poem, Rachelle. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thank you, Ulla. This was a fun review. xo

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Haha! I thoroughly enjoyed the story told, and your clever use of quirky words in this stacked limerick. Your aabba end rhyme pattern follows the limerick recommendations in FanStory's "Poetry Dances." Additionally, your story is humorous. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thank you very much! I appreciate the positive reinforcement and well-wishes at the polls.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What naughty girls they were/are. Limericks can be fun, I've written a few but unless one writes them regularly the rhythm is different enough to stumble a little, and even though you've miscounted a few syllables here, you've still got a rhythm going, it must be your musicality. Well done, an excellent post, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thanks!

reply by royowen on 19-Aug-2023

Welcome

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Funny stacked limerick! This tells a great story. Clever rhymes with Hannah, Janna, Montana, etc. Poor Granddad should have taken the warning. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

As my rabbi once said, "If Abraham had had to sacrifice his grandson instead of his son, all of history would have been different."

Thank you for the terrific review. xo

reply by Carol Clark2 on 19-Aug-2023

LOL! Good line! Have a great weekend.

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

I thought so, too!!

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I wish I could crown this amazing suite of limericks with a six it deserves, Rachelle! It was amazing. I loved Granddadda. Poor man, his grandchildren really ripped him off. I loved this, well done and Good luck!! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thank you, Sandra! Anytime I receive a review from you, it is a better day. I miss you very much. Maybe a video chat in our future? xoxoxo

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 19-Aug-2023

I've just pmd you! xxx

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Excellent. Definitely perfectly fitting into the limerick form, although no dirty punchlines. I guess that's all right? I really enjoyed reading these; they are beautifully put together. All the rhyme and rhythm work superbly. Well done.

John

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thanks. The teacher in me just can't do the raunchy thing. I had to settle for plucky.

I appreciate the review. xo

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

I officially crown you "Queen of Stacked Limerick Land!"
What a hoot!
Boy! It's one thing to pen a limerick, but to compose five of them with perfect form and story line, well, BRAVO!
Smiles all around, Rachelle!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thank you, dear poet master extraordinaire! I do appreciate that. xoxox