Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is so clever that you've accomplished this difficult brief using your rhyming words seamlessly without repetition. Your fine verse inspired by faith also has a pleasing flow with inspiring sentiments. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023

Hi Debbie,
Thank you for kind analysis and good luck wishes.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Such a beautiful stunning poem! You followed the contact rules exactly and produced a magical poem. I enjoyed this poem very much. And the picture you provided is an exact match for this beautiful piece.
Your rhyming scheme is delightful. And your meter seems intact to me. And I wish you best and good luck in the contest. I'm sure you will do well have a great night!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023

Hi Lea Tonin1,
Thank you for the encouraging comments and good luck wishes.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

How beautiful this is, mystery poet. A sacred, spiritual monorhymonh poem. Nothing felt forced and flowed smoothly. A winner here, I suspect. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023

Hi Sally,
Thank you for great review and best wishes. Both are much appreciated.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Excellent use of one rhyme - and not an obvious one - throughout, perfectly naturally. Really impressive, and there's a clear message too. Must have taken ages! Good luck in the competition. John

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023

Hi John,
Thank you for the kind comments and good luck wishes.