Tanka Collection
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Comment from lyenochka
A powerful tanka which takes us from the emotions of a raging passion that is like a tempestuous storm. But the loved one is absent and the relationship is waning into "dying embers." Eloquently expressed.
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reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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A powerful tanka which takes us from the emotions of a raging passion that is like a tempestuous storm. But the loved one is absent and the relationship is waning into "dying embers." Eloquently expressed.
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Comment Written 30-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you, big sister. I'm happy you like it.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Douglas Goff
This one is quite beautiful. The enchanting imagery lends itself to your wonderful portrayal.
You have the perfect combination of key action words in this one. Well done, my friend. I enjoyed this one!
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reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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This one is quite beautiful. The enchanting imagery lends itself to your wonderful portrayal.
You have the perfect combination of key action words in this one. Well done, my friend. I enjoyed this one!
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Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Douglas, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind feedback. May you have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is another beautiful paste did you have written in the Japanese art form. I enjoyed reading it and I enjoyed your presentation very much have a good day and God bless, Patricia
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reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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This is another beautiful paste did you have written in the Japanese art form. I enjoyed reading it and I enjoyed your presentation very much have a good day and God bless, Patricia
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Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Patricia. I appreciate your excellent review and kind feedback.
Gypsy Hugs
