The Mouth of Babes
3rd Place Finish15 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Nance
Kids are great grist for the humor mill. You told a great story and Adeleigh is gorgeous. I'll bet you are hoping she does not become a stand up comedian. Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
Kids are great grist for the humor mill. You told a great story and Adeleigh is gorgeous. I'll bet you are hoping she does not become a stand up comedian. Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Nicki. She is a treasure!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text is a great size. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. We have all mixed up words, but prostitutes for apostles is quite a mix-up. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid and relatable story. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
This is a good entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text is a great size. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. We have all mixed up words, but prostitutes for apostles is quite a mix-up. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid and relatable story. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you my friend. I am a 48 Hours/Missing/Cold Case Detective crime shows fanatic, so my kids know all those words. She just mixed it up, which was hilarious!
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute 50 Word story you have penned for the contest. I know that had to be really funny if it came from a child about something in Sunday School. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
This is a very cute 50 Word story you have penned for the contest. I know that had to be really funny if it came from a child about something in Sunday School. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Kids are funny little creatures!
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They are!!!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing this story. Children often get things like this mixed up. We need to be so careful when teaching them, to make sure they understand what the words we say mean.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
Thank you for sharing this story. Children often get things like this mixed up. We need to be so careful when teaching them, to make sure they understand what the words we say mean.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Oh yes!
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, where'd the child get that information from? Heh heh. I know elder child invented words like "hostipal" for hospital, que be bar for barbecue, I suppose apostles sounds somilst to prostitutes, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
Heh heh, where'd the child get that information from? Heh heh. I know elder child invented words like "hostipal" for hospital, que be bar for barbecue, I suppose apostles sounds somilst to prostitutes, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I?ve been in law enforcement my whole life so my kids know words like serial killers, forensics, hookers, prostitutes, and such. She just confused them. It was too funny.
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I can understand that