Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Two of God's greatest Gifts.
The Beauty Moon at night and over His Beautiful seas.
This was another well written message in the form of a Tanka.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review. May you have a wonderful day.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a lovely celebration of the "turbulent love" between the moon and the sea. And so much of the life within the sea is affected by the moonlight and the varying tides. I think your tanka book is great. I do like your haiku book which I have on Kindle now.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

Wow, what an honor. I never know what goes into that book ahead of time. For tanka I add a chapter before I write it. LoL

Thank you, big sister. I'm happy you like it.

Marival ❤️

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

Everything about this is lovely. The imagery and movement of the tides adds another dimension to the poem. You have the reader set up for the final line. Your presentation is simple and beautiful.

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The pull of those tides by the moon is evident in your tranquil write here and I could feel the tussle at sunset here as the scene glows with ambient golden hues, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs