The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Shadowed"Miranda solves a mystery.
13 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I hadn't seen this one. I am glad Miranda didn't run the officer off. I am with Mitch. She needs protection. I wonder how much protection will be there for her Mom and Waylon if her enemy shows up. She is in a dangerous situation now and I hope Mitch can help her discover who it is.Good job. My last six and it is only Monday. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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I hadn't seen this one. I am glad Miranda didn't run the officer off. I am with Mitch. She needs protection. I wonder how much protection will be there for her Mom and Waylon if her enemy shows up. She is in a dangerous situation now and I hope Mitch can help her discover who it is.Good job. My last six and it is only Monday. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you for this awesome rating. I'm honored to get your last six. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is absolutely excellent, Gretchen. This is a slow turning-up-of-the-burners. Like Miranda, I WANT to feel better because there's an officer on the scene, but I don't. I WANT to feel better that Miranda's momma is taking dinner to Waylon, but I don't. There's too many ways for this to go sideways.
Great tension and exceptional building up of the 'crackle.'
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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This is absolutely excellent, Gretchen. This is a slow turning-up-of-the-burners. Like Miranda, I WANT to feel better because there's an officer on the scene, but I don't. I WANT to feel better that Miranda's momma is taking dinner to Waylon, but I don't. There's too many ways for this to go sideways.
Great tension and exceptional building up of the 'crackle.'
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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It's all about to hit the fan, so to speak. I'm going to try to post again on Wednesday. Thank you for this awesome review and rating. Gretchen
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You started it. You wrote that awesome, riveting chapter!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Once again, you have presented a nice story with great dialogue. One small minor catch:
"Yes. Some kid spray painted my trailer." I say it as non-chalantly as possible.
(comma after trailer instead of the period because 'say' is a speech tag. Also my computer didn't like nonchalantly as you had it. May be one word.)
Good stuff!
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Once again, you have presented a nice story with great dialogue. One small minor catch:
"Yes. Some kid spray painted my trailer." I say it as non-chalantly as possible.
(comma after trailer instead of the period because 'say' is a speech tag. Also my computer didn't like nonchalantly as you had it. May be one word.)
Good stuff!
D
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thanks so much for catching those. Auto correct didn't give me a clear spelling. Both came up. I appreciate the nice comments. Gretchen
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We are on the same team my friend and I enjoy helping out my FS friends! God Bless
