Comment from royowen

Excellent

Three males in close proximity, especially in what call a caravan, probably reasonable size with an annexe, with opposing motives, Miranda is smart, and so are you, I think Mitch could be good for Miranda, she deserves a flash of good fortune, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you. She was kind of a mediator in this installment. I appreciate the feedback and review. Gretchen

reply by royowen on 03-Jan-2023

Most welcome

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I read some of the previous chapters. It is an exciting and intriguing story. I will continue to follow this to find out where you are going with this. I look forward to the next chapter.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you so much for following along. Gretchen

Comment from Rebecca Roberts1

Excellent

You did a good job leading the reader along and then you left me hanging.
Nice dialogue. I got a little confused when she was speaking to herself in the mirror. I had to read that twice to get who she was speaking to.
Looking forward to the next part.
Good job.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

She has many conversations with herself in the mirror. The mirror digs at her more vulnerable side. Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen