The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Truth about Missy (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, Waylon's right about this is gonna be good. I enjoyed
your continuing story, Gretchen. You did a great job with the
trek in the truck to pick up Aaron's. Who'd though Missy would
show up? I could see what Miranda said about homecoming. Some
people--esp women can and are vindictive. Aaron is just as
you wrote--naive, but he will learn fast if he hangs around
Miranda and Waylon.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Yes, Waylon's right about this is gonna be good. I enjoyed
your continuing story, Gretchen. You did a great job with the
trek in the truck to pick up Aaron's. Who'd though Missy would
show up? I could see what Miranda said about homecoming. Some
people--esp women can and are vindictive. Aaron is just as
you wrote--naive, but he will learn fast if he hangs around
Miranda and Waylon.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Lol. You hit the nail on the head with Aaron. Thank you so much for this splendid review. Gretchen
Comment from lancellot
This is a well written chapter. There is an issue surrounding the purpose of this chapter and short ride.
notes:
"I probably should have told you where we're going. I'm feeling kinda bad now for not telling you."
-I'm a bit confused here. They get into his new truck, without knowing where they are going? Why does Aaron her help, if he has the truck already?"
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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This is a well written chapter. There is an issue surrounding the purpose of this chapter and short ride.
notes:
"I probably should have told you where we're going. I'm feeling kinda bad now for not telling you."
-I'm a bit confused here. They get into his new truck, without knowing where they are going? Why does Aaron her help, if he has the truck already?"
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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He bought a new truck and wants her to drive his other one home. Aaron knew Miranda wouldn't help if she knew who he bought the truck from. Thank you for the great review.
Gretchen
Comment from royowen
How interesting that the only place he could purchase his heart's desire was from Missy Toblerone herself, Miranda's nemesis and an unforgiven person of dubious character, at least to Miranda, just love this story Gretchen, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : and hop(p)ing out.
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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How interesting that the only place he could purchase his heart's desire was from Missy Toblerone herself, Miranda's nemesis and an unforgiven person of dubious character, at least to Miranda, just love this story Gretchen, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : and hop(p)ing out.
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much. This is more of a redneck Peyton Place than my usual fare. Lol. Thanks for catching the typo.
Gretchen
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It?s great though, I remember reading the book, and then the the TVseries didn?t do it justice, well done, blessings Roy
