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Comment from BethShelby
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I think you had a teacher that was unreasonable and had no knowledge of the biology. I don't think anyone can get hiccups on purpose. I used to have them occasionally too. They can be embarrassing. I found holding my breath until I thought I was passing out got rid of them. Good luck with this true story contest. I enjoyed how you related the experience.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    It was back then, when tolerance what not employed. Thank you so very much. Ulla:)))
Comment from Wendy G
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They were quite unreasonable to punish you for it! Why not just take you out and offer you a drink of water? Teaches in those times were unnecessarily harsh. You have nevertheless written a fine account of your experience and I wish you the best for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much, Wendy. Yes the were quite unreasonable back then, but then again, times were so different. Ulla:)))
Comment from Sankey
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This was good. I was only thinking, recently, I had not had any hiccup attacks in ages. However, that must have brought them on again, not long after. I bet you were a cute nine-year-old. Loved the beautiful butterfly.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    Thank you so so very much., Geoff. It was not a nice experience. I'm glad you liked it. Ulla:)))
Comment from Shirley McLain
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I had this all written and hit the wrong button, and it disappeared. I was always mortified by my loud obnoxious hiccups. They happened at the most inconvenient times, such as in the middle of prayer at church. You did a great job with your story. I enjoyed the read. Take care. Shirley

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    Oh , I know how that feels. It's awful. It has happened.to me a few times.
    Yes, it was not a good that my hiccups happened. Ulla:)))
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, Ulla,

Wow, your teacher was really mean. I am older and I could not sit without doing anything for an hour, that is child abuse. I went to catholic school in Spain and my teachers were mean too. Excellent entry for the Share Your Story contest. Well done!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
    Thank you so very much, Marival. Un besito, Ulla:)))
Comment from Pantygynt
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I sympathise because I used to suffer from hiccups as a child mainly when I laughed. I can still laugh but dont seem to to get the hiccups anymore. Teachers back then could be very obtuse I'm afraid.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much, Jim. You're so right in your observation. Ulla:)))
Comment from Sally Law
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Oh my, how terribly cruel! I was spanked in first grade for talking, if you can believe that. My parents had a cow and gave the teacher heck. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much, Sally. No, it was not a pleasant experience. Ulla xxx
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Ulla,
Your story reads very well. The structure is great, and the reader gets to feel empathetic toward that sweet little nine year old.
Excellent story, Ulla.
And I'm so glad you're ok! Hugs,
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much, Cindy. I so appreciate it. Ulla:)))
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 16-Sep-2022
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I have to say that your teachers were very strict. Who could conjure up a hiccup voluntarily. I can't. The trick is to drink a lot of water to get rid of it. It works for me but you wouldn't have known. It was cruel to treat you like that. Fortunately you have turned out fine.

Well done.

I will be visiting Spain next January or February. Which city do you live?


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Hi Jasmine, well, you.have to remember it was back in the late fifties early sixties. Thinks were so different then. I live outside Denia. I would love to meet up.with you. Ulla :)))
reply by Jasmine Girl on 16-Sep-2022
    YEs. Denia is on the coast and iis very close to Valencia. I will definitely come by. We can take trains, correct. My husband has been there before.
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, that's so awful! It's not like you willed your hiccups! The teachers should have been more understanding. I am glad you still liked your school except that embarrassing incident. I get hiccups at night usually when experiencing the temperature changes from a warm shower to the cool room. I wonder if you found any triggers for your hiccups? Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Hi Helen, it was so much stricter back then. It's amazing how times have moved on, and for the better. It was still a wonderful school though. Hugs, Ulla:)))