The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Just Desserts (Miranda 5)"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this installment, even though I have not read the earlier ones.
Despite that I was able to follow along. I was also able to get a good sense of the characters and their surroundings.
The dialogue reads authentically and has a natural flow. It allows the reader to step "into," the story.
Which is the sign of a talented writer.
I look forward to the next installment.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed this installment, even though I have not read the earlier ones.
Despite that I was able to follow along. I was also able to get a good sense of the characters and their surroundings.
The dialogue reads authentically and has a natural flow. It allows the reader to step "into," the story.
Which is the sign of a talented writer.
I look forward to the next installment.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad to know you weren't terribly confused. I appreciate your candor.
Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wow, Miranda is a hero in my eyes. Tough, strong, and good to children even when they don't "deserve"...except she gets how much this new ward of hers needs the love and compassion.
I continue to absolutely LOVE this book, Gretchen! The dialogue and situations are completely believable and natural and flow so seamlessly together from chapter to chapter. You are such a seriously exceptional writer! Xo
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Wow, Miranda is a hero in my eyes. Tough, strong, and good to children even when they don't "deserve"...except she gets how much this new ward of hers needs the love and compassion.
I continue to absolutely LOVE this book, Gretchen! The dialogue and situations are completely believable and natural and flow so seamlessly together from chapter to chapter. You are such a seriously exceptional writer! Xo
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your enthusiastic feedback. And the six stars ain't too bad either.
Gretchen
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Comment from BermyBye50
GWHARGIS,
This is an exceptional chapter in your Miranda Chronicles. The story is all too familiar and the despair woven throughout the paragraphs are brilliantly enhanced by the lives of the characters. The dialogue fuels the misery and the imagery paints an accurate picture of their life experiences. Well Done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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GWHARGIS,
This is an exceptional chapter in your Miranda Chronicles. The story is all too familiar and the despair woven throughout the paragraphs are brilliantly enhanced by the lives of the characters. The dialogue fuels the misery and the imagery paints an accurate picture of their life experiences. Well Done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Why, thank you so much. I appreciate the thoughtful review and comments. Thank you for the stars as well.
Gretchen
Comment from royowen
When do people decide they need some supernatural help? If I thought it was that easy I would say so, God does what God does, it's only in recent times I've started to understand, I never really deserved God, but there were times in my life He intervened in my life. He sees the potential, (I sometimes still think I don't deserve it, but God is truly compassionate) just love this Gretchen, God saw your potential. Bless you, Roy
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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When do people decide they need some supernatural help? If I thought it was that easy I would say so, God does what God does, it's only in recent times I've started to understand, I never really deserved God, but there were times in my life He intervened in my life. He sees the potential, (I sometimes still think I don't deserve it, but God is truly compassionate) just love this Gretchen, God saw your potential. Bless you, Roy
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I've noticed that when I pray out loud or with purpose it's usually when I'm overwhelmed. I thank God every day but it's a little less enthusiastic when the going is good. Thank you for this nice review.
Gretchen
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I meant to give you six, my finger erred. Sorry.
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It's okay. There is plenty of six star writing on here. I'm sure it will go to a deserving writer
Gretcheb
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You are deserving Gretchen, trouble is they give as many to the frequent reviewers ans the infrequent ones, bless you.
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Well, thank you
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You?re worth it
