Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

I agree wholeheartedly with all that you depict in this terrible hypothetical reality of the future if we don't stop relying on computers for everything! Right now, it thinks for us and decides what we eat and drink. What would we do if the computers all crashed at the same time? We have to be ready for this and so much more. I say do away with computers and cellphones and all that nonsense! But that is just me, we need to gather more people together and have symposiums about this sort of thing.
Thanks for letting me speak up about the injustices in our systems of high-tech gadgets.
Jesse




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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022

Thanks so much for the excellent review and your words of support for my theme here. I am glad it got so many people thinking, and it is encouraging that so many people seem to agree that logic and technology is dangerous. estory

reply by Jesse James Doty on 05-Aug-2022

I'll trust my gut anytime over logic.
Glad so many people agree!
Jesse

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

This is a thought-provoking poem that doesn't seem that farfetched as overpopulation and climate change drastically alter our ability to sustain human life on earth. As you point out in your note, the solution, from a logical and merciless perspective, involves eliminating under-functioning and "useless" people. Your poem is a stark warning about relying on the solutions of technology. Well-presented and well-crafted.

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022

Thanks for the words of support for my piece, and I am glad it was so successful at getting the point across. Compassion and love can't be substituted with logic estory