Tanka Collection
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- good presentation picture- good flow- telling a story about missing someone most at a certain time - while listening to doves - paints a nice picture- good job
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- good presentation picture- good flow- telling a story about missing someone most at a certain time - while listening to doves - paints a nice picture- good job
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. It's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy
your haiku that I just read is beautiful, about Doves,
Stan and I hear their Coos such a peaceful sound to listen to as the sun descends
Thank you for posting your wonderful haiku.
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Gypsy
your haiku that I just read is beautiful, about Doves,
Stan and I hear their Coos such a peaceful sound to listen to as the sun descends
Thank you for posting your wonderful haiku.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. It's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
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you are welcome Gypsy Blue
Gert
Comment from John Ciarmello
When someone is gone or has left a relationship, certain triggers such as songs or inflections bring all of it rushing back to your thoughts. This piece is relatable and well put together. Best, JohnC
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When someone is gone or has left a relationship, certain triggers such as songs or inflections bring all of it rushing back to your thoughts. This piece is relatable and well put together. Best, JohnC
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. It's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from LovnPeace
Beautiful. haiku is one of my favorite styles. I often see them written like standard poems, Capitals and punctuations abound. So happy to see you say, no, no for this. Blessings, Barbara
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Beautiful. haiku is one of my favorite styles. I often see them written like standard poems, Capitals and punctuations abound. So happy to see you say, no, no for this. Blessings, Barbara
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Hello, Lovn Peace, this poem is a tanka but it has that same feeling.
Thank you very much. It's always good to hear from new friends. Have a lovely day.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
