The Tor
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Penance"Adventures around & upon a hill
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Your novel seems to be advancing slowly at the moment, and my gut feeling is that these discussions of sins and penance are becoming rebarbative. Here, I may be being dense, but it remains unclear to me why Brother Samuel was convoked into the presence of Prior Richard.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Your novel seems to be advancing slowly at the moment, and my gut feeling is that these discussions of sins and penance are becoming rebarbative. Here, I may be being dense, but it remains unclear to me why Brother Samuel was convoked into the presence of Prior Richard.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your review.He was late for prayer which was intolerable. It was viewed as disobedience so he had to stand all day at the entrance of the chapel. Then he had to go see the Prior when his penance was completed. There were actually worse punishments, such as beatings with a stick. It was quite a fear based environment.
