Claimed
When you're caught between destiny and desire.14 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
You are one hell of a writer. As one who has read many things, many different types of stories. This exciting account led me through a place I have never been. In my mind I have experienced that type of desire for one I know that I could never possess, that did not lessen my desire. So, I well know how powerful repressed desire can be. You did such a great job of descriptive writing that I saw and felt all that you described. I am not Lycan obviously, but I know primal lustful desire. I know how difficult it can be to control it. My humanity knows that it must be controlled. This powerful account has my senses on fire. Thank you for this exciting read.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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You are one hell of a writer. As one who has read many things, many different types of stories. This exciting account led me through a place I have never been. In my mind I have experienced that type of desire for one I know that I could never possess, that did not lessen my desire. So, I well know how powerful repressed desire can be. You did such a great job of descriptive writing that I saw and felt all that you described. I am not Lycan obviously, but I know primal lustful desire. I know how difficult it can be to control it. My humanity knows that it must be controlled. This powerful account has my senses on fire. Thank you for this exciting read.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Well thank you so much for the comments. I'm newer to writing just an avid reader myself but I love the paranormal. So many different ways to take a story. Much appreciated for your time in reading my first post. I was nervous.
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It is clearly apparent that you absorbed more than you may have realized. Your writing is superior to some who have chosen writing as a lifelong pursuit.
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I'm just learning but I thank you for the encouragement
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I loved it! The storyline is gripping, your descriptions are vivid and then when he finally saw her, he was surprised. She was not what he expected, but she's still going to be his. I'm really looking forward to the next part, I enjoy paranormal, too. Well done, great start! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I loved it! The storyline is gripping, your descriptions are vivid and then when he finally saw her, he was surprised. She was not what he expected, but she's still going to be his. I'm really looking forward to the next part, I enjoy paranormal, too. Well done, great start! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much. I'm a paranormal girl too. I'm excited to see where they go too. This was my first post so wasn't really sure what I was doing. Hopefully I'll figure it out soon. Thank you for your time.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You have a great story. It kept my interest. I see this is your first post, you are a great writer. You have a way with words. Keep up the great work. I can see you turning this story into a best seller. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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You have a great story. It kept my interest. I see this is your first post, you are a great writer. You have a way with words. Keep up the great work. I can see you turning this story into a best seller. Thank you.
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much. It was my first post and I was nervous. Hovered over that button for a minute before I pressed it. Thank you for your time and your critique. It means a lot.
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You are a fantastic writer. Post all your work. You have nothing to be nervous about. You are talented.
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Thank you so very much and I am truly humbled by your kind words. It's greatly appreciated but I can see being nervous for a little bit yet.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Chelsey Johanson
I really like the story line. Very creative. Wonderful descriptive words. Did a great job explaining the setting and the characters in the short story.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I really like the story line. Very creative. Wonderful descriptive words. Did a great job explaining the setting and the characters in the short story.
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your time in reading and commenting. It's greatly appreciated.
