Concertina
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "A Word Ignored."Vietnam veteran comes to the end of his denial.
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Comment from royowen
Yes indeed, we've been called to preach the gospel, no more, no less, the seed is ours for the planting, someone else does the watering and God Himself applies the increase, but through all this, God gives us the desire to receive, but that's His business, the transaction is between us and God, "many are called but few are chosen" a mystery of choice. Beautifully written my friend, the field is white with harvest. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Yes indeed, we've been called to preach the gospel, no more, no less, the seed is ours for the planting, someone else does the watering and God Himself applies the increase, but through all this, God gives us the desire to receive, but that's His business, the transaction is between us and God, "many are called but few are chosen" a mystery of choice. Beautifully written my friend, the field is white with harvest. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Roy. The next chapter, "Rust Never Sleeps" reveals complicated and darker events coming. I am so tempted to explain them before posting. However, I will sit on my hands waiting to hear from a reader who sees them before I have to explain. Which I will do with an epilogue. Thanks again for your review. Yard
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You did a great job writing this. As an author myself, I felt this was hard to write, but you did a wonderful job.
"Brother Archer sensing a spiritual interruption but not quite discerning if it was good or bad, said (Omit the beginning quotation mark in front of 'Brother')
Lee sat behind the steering wheel and looked past Brother Archer's concerned face to the orchard behind him, "That's quite a collection of trees you got there." (period, not comma needed after 'him.')
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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You did a great job writing this. As an author myself, I felt this was hard to write, but you did a wonderful job.
"Brother Archer sensing a spiritual interruption but not quite discerning if it was good or bad, said (Omit the beginning quotation mark in front of 'Brother')
Lee sat behind the steering wheel and looked past Brother Archer's concerned face to the orchard behind him, "That's quite a collection of trees you got there." (period, not comma needed after 'him.')
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Barbara. Yes, it was hard to write on so many levels but authors/reviewers such as yourself help keep this hack in check. The next chapter "Rust Never Sleeps" reveals complicated and darker events coming. I am so tempted to explain them before posting. However, I will sit on my hands waiting to hear from a reader who sees them before I have to explain. Which I will do with an epilogue. Thanks again for your review. Yard
