Your Love
Those unforgettable moments in love21 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
A nice little write...and of course, love and emotions in their simplest forms. Always the best way for love.
Nicely written, nicely projected, and nicely delivered with abundant imagery.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Have a god week.
RGstar
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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A nice little write...and of course, love and emotions in their simplest forms. Always the best way for love.
Nicely written, nicely projected, and nicely delivered with abundant imagery.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Have a god week.
RGstar
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Hello RG, thank you so much for sharing your day with me this way. A little encouragement goes a long way for me. :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Lovely reply.
Thank you Missy...hope to read from you again soon.
Have a beautiful Christmas
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You as well :)
Comment from scongrove
Great writing, and so emotional! I can tell you have passion in your heart, and you feel each and every word. It definitely shows in your writing. I just love to read passionate poems. It brings back memories of loving someone like this. Thanks for sharing!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Great writing, and so emotional! I can tell you have passion in your heart, and you feel each and every word. It definitely shows in your writing. I just love to read passionate poems. It brings back memories of loving someone like this. Thanks for sharing!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Awe Shana, thank you for the bling and the lovely review. I have had a few things going on in my life that has kept me from reading and reviewing but hopefully that is over and I can catch up.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You're very welcome and well deserved.
Comment from amahra
Wow! I thought I was the only one who kept a pen and pad next to my bed. I make constant notes of first lines in dreams and even lines in movies I'm watching become poems. I always loved your writing and know I've said this before, but so glad you have not left the cite. Great poem. You never disappoints.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Wow! I thought I was the only one who kept a pen and pad next to my bed. I make constant notes of first lines in dreams and even lines in movies I'm watching become poems. I always loved your writing and know I've said this before, but so glad you have not left the cite. Great poem. You never disappoints.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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There you are :)
Thank you so very much for the sweet review. I don't often get poems delivered in this fashion but this one was persistent :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Begin Again
My dear Missy, I so love when you put your heart into your writing.... Your passion drips from every word. It's an emotional, moving, and thoughtful poem all wrapped into one package. Loved it!
Carol
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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My dear Missy, I so love when you put your heart into your writing.... Your passion drips from every word. It's an emotional, moving, and thoughtful poem all wrapped into one package. Loved it!
Carol
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Carol, I am humbled by your review. I see your skill and knowledge of writing, so to get a review such as this from someone much
respected, I am truly honored.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You are so sweet. Glad to see you posted it on facebook as well.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Missy,
before I go onto review, I'll tell you of this connection. I'm sitting in my car today around ten hours ago, and this feeling comes over me to write down the actual feelings one has when love and connection takes hold... the shortening of breath, a sensation through your body of a hollowness, a weakness, and yet something so strong it causes goose bumps that tingle the heightened senses of attraction throughout your entire body... the body breeze one's skin and soul feels when the distance between two bodies close in. I was wondering how I would relate such thoughts into words... and here they are! Spooky!
Okay, I guess I'm a sap when it come to love and romance, but I so enjoyed reading this poem, It connected.
A beautiful presentation of visual anticipation... and then you have the appropriate art to enhance the words... yeah, well done!
With our thoughts we create...
a visual sense of felling.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Hi Missy,
before I go onto review, I'll tell you of this connection. I'm sitting in my car today around ten hours ago, and this feeling comes over me to write down the actual feelings one has when love and connection takes hold... the shortening of breath, a sensation through your body of a hollowness, a weakness, and yet something so strong it causes goose bumps that tingle the heightened senses of attraction throughout your entire body... the body breeze one's skin and soul feels when the distance between two bodies close in. I was wondering how I would relate such thoughts into words... and here they are! Spooky!
Okay, I guess I'm a sap when it come to love and romance, but I so enjoyed reading this poem, It connected.
A beautiful presentation of visual anticipation... and then you have the appropriate art to enhance the words... yeah, well done!
With our thoughts we create...
a visual sense of felling.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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My dear friend as always, I am left speechless with your review. You take such care in wording to leave the respondent knowing exactly how their words touched you. I am delighted that this connected with you.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
(a visual sense of feeling) I like that. :)
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My pleasure Missy. Love and feeling sounds as though it would be an easy subject to write about, or to form a poem of... but it takes finesse, soul and skill to bring it to life. Kudos!
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Blushing ...Thank you, James.
Comment from Pantygynt
You are so lucky to have experienced love like this. Isn't it wonderful when that happens and you awake with the 'solution' on your mind?
Typo here: 'My skin(s) warms with a soft blush'
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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You are so lucky to have experienced love like this. Isn't it wonderful when that happens and you awake with the 'solution' on your mind?
Typo here: 'My skin(s) warms with a soft blush'
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Hi there Gynt. I always love your reviews of my work. You have a gentle touch even with "crit".
Thank you sweet man.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from jaded831
Very emotional, sensuous but not dirty. Your theme has universal appeal, every word flows into the next. In your second verse I believe skins should be skin. The picture compliments your words.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Very emotional, sensuous but not dirty. Your theme has universal appeal, every word flows into the next. In your second verse I believe skins should be skin. The picture compliments your words.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Hello my new friend. Thank you so much for the lovely review :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from oliver818
I really enjoyed reading your poem, it really has some powerful imagery in it. I like the way you described love nourishing your soul. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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I really enjoyed reading your poem, it really has some powerful imagery in it. I like the way you described love nourishing your soul. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Oliver818 I really appreciate you spending a portion of your day with me and leaving this lovely review.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Your Love ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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' Your Love ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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I am speechless. This review is one any writer would be blessed to receive. Thank you so very much.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You captured those loving moments two people share when they truly love each other. I think the gremlins have attacked the last word, but it can be edited out, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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You captured those loving moments two people share when they truly love each other. I think the gremlins have attacked the last word, but it can be edited out, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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I ran the gremlins off and corrected their handywork :)
Thank you, Dolly for the lovely review and oh so soft "crit".
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
