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Worship

Acrostic Poem.

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Hi Patricia... I enjoyed reading your acrostic and join with you in lifting my spirit in praise to the Lord. You chose wonderful words to complete this challenging and complicated form. Well done!

Melissa

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
    Thank you for your real nice review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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I like your acrostic on Worship. It is something we can do no matter where we are. When we're alone we can lift our hands and our voices. When we are with others, praise can still rise from our hearts. Our worship glorifies God.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
    Thank you for your real nice review.
reply by Anne Johnston on 05-Oct-2021
    You are welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your sweet words are faithful and endearing here Patricia and your prayer like words are a joy to read, I hope you have a wonderful weekend, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
    Thank you for your real nice review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Pat. Your work inspires me to be a better person. It is written with such dedication to your own desire to live a better life. I also love the special words you put in there! I hope you are well! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
    Thank you for your real nice review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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This was a very good, spiritually soothing poem, an acrostic for "Worship". You have impressive phraseology, great imagery and visuals and good artistic presentation.

You have the whole poem in Italic, but one line fell out of Italic:

"Have our heart right before Him"

You may want to check it out.

Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed it.

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from juliaSjames
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Hello Pat

I haven't seen you post for a while. Hope all's well.

This acrostic poem flows well and each line is carefully crafted to contribute to the meaning of worship, your chosen word.

I'm reminded of the phrase " worship the Lord in the beauty of holiness". I love that invitation.

Thanks for sharing

Stay safe healthy and blessed

Julia

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    My vision is not doing well, that is why I have not posted much as of late. However, I will soon be taking a new vitamin that shows promise to help my sight.
reply by juliaSjames on 30-Sep-2021
    Hoping the vitamins work my friend.

    Blessings Julia