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Tribute to Crzypntr.

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Comment from Janetsue
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I think you have written a wonderful tribute to August based on his own work. It is a special idea that is very thoughtful and touching. I also find the picture intriguing. I am positive August would have loved everything you have posted here.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Paul McFarland
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A great tribute to your friend. The stars have always held a fascination for me. On these clear cool autumn nights, I really enjoy lying outside on a blanket and trying to identify the different constellations.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    I have an app on my phone called 'SkyView'. It's amazing and I highly recommend it - have you tried anything like that?
reply by Paul McFarland on 14-Sep-2021
    I have the same app on my phone.
Comment from Sally Law
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I apologize for no six! Stunning presentation and sweet verse for August! I will say we were acquainted and it was brief. He was a shooting star in my FanStory panorama. A beautiful blink.

Sending you my best today as always, and my sincere condolences in your great loss. May the God of all comfort bear you up.
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much! Virtual stars are always accepted. Hugs-
Comment from mermaids
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It is so heart breaking to lose another member of Fanstory. Your words bring forth his spirit and he is alive in the stars.The theme of the stars is comforting.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks so much!
Comment from nomi338
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The thing about stars for me, is that they are lovely to look at but much too far to ever touch, and like both poems point out, when they are gone you miss them so much. The death of one minimizes us all. Gone but not forgotten is a given. All the more so when the now deceased member left behind a treasure trove for us to gather and hold in reverence of their creative genius. RIP dear brother.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks, nomi. Wise words.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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The pain of losing someone so close and special to us cannot be overstated. It is great loss to all his FanStorians and his family and friends. This is a wonderful tribute coming straight out of your heart. RIP.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Sesha. I adore this artwork, too. One day I shall try to get a signed piece for myself!
Comment from Bonnie Seach
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This poem is a tribute to another poem about the stars. This is high in the sky and most uplifting with words, rhyme, rhythm and stunning visual presentation.
It reminds me of a verse in the book of Psalms 147:4
He counts the number of the stars: He calls all of them by name.
Thank you.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Absolutely appropriate. Thanks for thinking of that. Thanks for the six also - you are very kind. Hugs-
reply by Bonnie Seach on 14-Sep-2021
    Hello there Robyn. I love the way you placed little stars around the words on a black background. Hugs back! ⭐💖
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is a skillfully-written, touching tribute to crzypnter--whose deep and expressive poems I had never read till he was gone! Your have used
beautiful, poignant words and imagery.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Janice!
Comment from Wendy G
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Wow, I love his poem and also what you have done to incorporate it into your tribute. That is very clever, and I am sure his family will be touched and delighted. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Wendy!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very nice poem you have penned in memory of this very nice person from this sight. I don't think I had much contact with him. Thank you for sharing. It is so sad he is gone. May you rest in peace dear friend. Teri

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Teri!