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Endings

a short story

16 total reviews 
Comment from nomi338
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is one of the best, most ingenious things you have ever done. I love this. You should do more of this. I am actually jealous, I wish I had thought to do this or something like it. Oh man, you beat me to it again. I really like this.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Thank you, nomi, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
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Lol. You forgot to add the X-file characters and ending up on Enterprise which lands on a planet called Mayberry. Thanks for the wild ride in TV-Dreamland, Bill!

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from Gert sherwood
Excellent
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a short story
Endings
Bill Schott I had fun reading of now you changed each of your chacters to be a Well know TV chacters.
Let me tell you I was surprised by the ending when--

the zombies shove through the opening and end up in a music video with Michael Jackson.
Now that is an odd dream.
Gert

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Gert
reply by Gert sherwood on 22-Aug-2021
    You are welcome Bill Schott
    Gertt
reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Aug-2021
    You are welcome Bill Schott
    Gert
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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Ha ha ha Thriller re-lived here as those zombies sure know how to dance the night away, you made me smile here Bill with your inventive imagination, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Lana Marie
Excellent
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This is really fun and creative! I love all the different shows that you incorporated throughout the whole thing. Very well enjoyed! Thanks for the entertainment.


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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Lana
reply by Lana Marie on 22-Aug-2021
    You?re welcome ☺️
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-This is an most unusual
dream, Bill, but I think most are.
-At least yours is organized;
mine are just plain weird.
-I wonder if you really dreamed
these things or made them up.
-At any rate you have good
descriptive detail and a good ending.


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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Pam
reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Aug-2021
    You are welcome, Bill.