Faith!
The Soul is immortal and is God's miniature/minion.33 total reviews
Comment from 8upchef
What a great take on faith. I enjoy how you lead the reader to understand that it takes some dedication and perseverance to show true faith. The examples that are slid in for a type of verification are wonderful. Thanks for the share.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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What a great take on faith. I enjoy how you lead the reader to understand that it takes some dedication and perseverance to show true faith. The examples that are slid in for a type of verification are wonderful. Thanks for the share.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello 8upchef,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from l.raven
Hi RP, sorry I didn't have time to read your poem this morning...I had to run out the door to go to church...
it takes me about 45 minutes to get there...it is where I used to live...but I love the Pastor...he is so good at what he does...teaching the word of God...
Faith my sweet friend is what it takes for us to go to Heaven...and it truly does asks us to walk a straight line...believe true...and if it isn't done with a smile...it's pretend...and God can see right through pretend...our souls are eternal only through Faith...and the power of God...
I love your poem of Faith sweet guy...beautiful...and I love the picture...if you look at it...it looks like the light is being held in a hand...best of luck in the contest...very well written you...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hi RP, sorry I didn't have time to read your poem this morning...I had to run out the door to go to church...
it takes me about 45 minutes to get there...it is where I used to live...but I love the Pastor...he is so good at what he does...teaching the word of God...
Faith my sweet friend is what it takes for us to go to Heaven...and it truly does asks us to walk a straight line...believe true...and if it isn't done with a smile...it's pretend...and God can see right through pretend...our souls are eternal only through Faith...and the power of God...
I love your poem of Faith sweet guy...beautiful...and I love the picture...if you look at it...it looks like the light is being held in a hand...best of luck in the contest...very well written you...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello L. Raven,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
Thank you very much for your exceptional 6 star rating and great comments. Both are greatly appreciated.
With best wishes,
~RP
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your so welcome sweet guy...always...best wishes back at you...love Linda xxoo
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Hello L. Raven,
Feelings outshine the words.
Thanks a lot!
With best wishes
~ RP
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your welcome a lot...and all the luck in the world...have a wonderful day you...love to ya...xxoo
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your welcome a lot...and all the luck in the world...have a wonderful day you...love to ya...xxoo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job describing what faith is and how it affects the individual. Your examples work well. I like the mostly monorhyme in each verse. Your lines flow smoothly with a great message.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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You did a good job describing what faith is and how it affects the individual. Your examples work well. I like the mostly monorhyme in each verse. Your lines flow smoothly with a great message.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello Jan,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Aussie
Good luck in the contest. Must have taken you ages to work out the lines, I found (with respect) continuous rhyming every line was annoying. Stanza 4, last line doesn't rhyme. I don't want to sound too critical, the last stanza goes off at a tangent. I just felt you were too stringent and then almost like a rocking horse. I hope you understand. K xx
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Good luck in the contest. Must have taken you ages to work out the lines, I found (with respect) continuous rhyming every line was annoying. Stanza 4, last line doesn't rhyme. I don't want to sound too critical, the last stanza goes off at a tangent. I just felt you were too stringent and then almost like a rocking horse. I hope you understand. K xx
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello Aussie,
Thank you very much for your so balanced and encouraging review!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Gert sherwood
Faith!
RPSaxena your rhyming poem faith for the contest is a well written and has a message as you wrote that the soul is
immortal and is the miniature/minion of God.-
Best to you in this contest
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Faith!
RPSaxena your rhyming poem faith for the contest is a well written and has a message as you wrote that the soul is
immortal and is the miniature/minion of God.-
Best to you in this contest
Gert
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello Gert,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
With best wishes,
~ RP
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RPSaxena, you are most welcome
Gert
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RPSaxena you are most welcome
Gert
Comment from royowen
I remember Jesus sent out His disciples with these words, "Behold, I send you out as lambs among wolves, be as gentle as doves, but as wise as serpents." Knowledge tends to make us aware of sin, but choosing innocence gives us the right path to walk, not all cunning people use knowledge for good, but good is wisdom. Beautifully written RP, and excellent poem, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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I remember Jesus sent out His disciples with these words, "Behold, I send you out as lambs among wolves, be as gentle as doves, but as wise as serpents." Knowledge tends to make us aware of sin, but choosing innocence gives us the right path to walk, not all cunning people use knowledge for good, but good is wisdom. Beautifully written RP, and excellent poem, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello Roy,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
Thank you very much for good luck and blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from JennStar
I loved the poem the formatting is really interesting haven't seen it done exactly like that before gave a good visual to the poem. I have always like the thought of the soul as a miniature of God.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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I loved the poem the formatting is really interesting haven't seen it done exactly like that before gave a good visual to the poem. I have always like the thought of the soul as a miniature of God.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello JennStar,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
Thank you very much for your exceptional 6 star rating and great comments. Both are greatly appreciated.
With best wishes,
~RP
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is some inner pleasure gained from faith here that is personal to the writer as he believes that this is good therapy and I agree too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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There is some inner pleasure gained from faith here that is personal to the writer as he believes that this is good therapy and I agree too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello Dolly,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
Thank you very much for the same.
With best wishes,
~RP
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Faith!
by RPSaxena
Nice spiritual poem entry for the Faith Poetry Contest. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Faith!
by RPSaxena
Nice spiritual poem entry for the Faith Poetry Contest. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
Thank you very much for the same.
With best wishes,
~RP
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem lets us see that faith makes us hopeful and strong. It also reminds us that the ability to write is a gift for which we should be thankful.
I don't understand who 'ton' is shortened for. Is 'S short for Shakespeare?
You could can change William to Williams For Tennessee Williams.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
joan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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This poem lets us see that faith makes us hopeful and strong. It also reminds us that the ability to write is a gift for which we should be thankful.
I don't understand who 'ton' is shortened for. Is 'S short for Shakespeare?
You could can change William to Williams For Tennessee Williams.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
joan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Hello Joan,
I am overwhelmed by your generous and most encouraging review!
Thank you very much for the same.
[ 'ton' is shortened for Milton.]
With best wishes,
~RP
