Hope
Things We Hope For48 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your poem on hope is well done. A very good entry for this contest. You have chosen a good picture to illustrate. Hope is what keeps us going every day, and hope in Jesus gives us confidence.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Your poem on hope is well done. A very good entry for this contest. You have chosen a good picture to illustrate. Hope is what keeps us going every day, and hope in Jesus gives us confidence.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Thank you. I didn't win the contest though.
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You are welcome. Just keep writing, we enter a lot of contests, but everyone can't win. It is fun to try, though.
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Right.
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Have a great day
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You too.
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You too.
Comment from harmony13
The these words to be heartfelt. The words are descriptive, have a
great message, are uplifting and creative. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is awesome and for me states what life is about!
Thank you for a great poem!.....Maria
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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The these words to be heartfelt. The words are descriptive, have a
great message, are uplifting and creative. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is awesome and for me states what life is about!
Thank you for a great poem!.....Maria
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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You are welcome. It should have won the the contest.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
What a sweet poem this is and I wish you good luck in the contest. As you say, Jesus loves us and tries to keep us safe and on track. If we love and worship Him, our lives will be pleasant and fruitful!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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What a sweet poem this is and I wish you good luck in the contest. As you say, Jesus loves us and tries to keep us safe and on track. If we love and worship Him, our lives will be pleasant and fruitful!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thanks, the contest is over
Comment from amahra
Hope is a wonderful feeling to have. It's also the first vital part of faith when it is said, faith is things hoped for. Great contest entry you've chosen and I 'Hope' it wins. Pun intended.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Hope is a wonderful feeling to have. It's also the first vital part of faith when it is said, faith is things hoped for. Great contest entry you've chosen and I 'Hope' it wins. Pun intended.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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It didn't win.
Comment from mbagby23
For how can we live without having any hope. A very much needed poem to read as I laid a trouble burden to lifted in my life. I am waiting to see the turn around outcome
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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For how can we live without having any hope. A very much needed poem to read as I laid a trouble burden to lifted in my life. I am waiting to see the turn around outcome
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Pookietoo,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme - Hope!
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Hello Pookietoo,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme - Hope!
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from E. Denison
I like that you focused on the feeling of "Hope", pookietoo. I think this poem is an excellent commentary on hope and the joy and resolution that hope can bring. Best of luck in this contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I like that you focused on the feeling of "Hope", pookietoo. I think this poem is an excellent commentary on hope and the joy and resolution that hope can bring. Best of luck in this contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you. I did not well in the contest.
Comment from bob cullen
I love the uplifting message in this piece. It really delivers a powerful message. Never give up on hope or prayer. I'd like to make a tiny suggestion in line three of verse three. I'd change the 'a' to 'each.' It would then read; 'We hope to learn from EACH mistake.
It really is a quality poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I love the uplifting message in this piece. It really delivers a powerful message. Never give up on hope or prayer. I'd like to make a tiny suggestion in line three of verse three. I'd change the 'a' to 'each.' It would then read; 'We hope to learn from EACH mistake.
It really is a quality poem.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you for your nice words.
Comment from nomi338
To be without hope is like being adrift at sea without a rudder or anchor. Where will you go, what will you do? To be without hope is to be naked in Winter, what will cover or protect you? To me, hope is essential to life and to living. I do not believe that one can successfully live without it.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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To be without hope is like being adrift at sea without a rudder or anchor. Where will you go, what will you do? To be without hope is to be naked in Winter, what will cover or protect you? To me, hope is essential to life and to living. I do not believe that one can successfully live without it.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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You're right.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Of all the feelings you could write about, certainly hope is one of the best. It lifts the darkest spirits and finds a way to find a way. Every time.
This was a sweet and smart poem and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Of all the feelings you could write about, certainly hope is one of the best. It lifts the darkest spirits and finds a way to find a way. Every time.
This was a sweet and smart poem and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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You're welcome. Thank you very much.
