Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

My you did a fine job with a poem this long. Every stanza is a jewel with its own properties. You wrote in a manner that allows the reader to grasp your passion and meaning. I can imagine this place I have never been so clearly through your words. Your thoughts on Covid and its aftermath of death and despair were presented without treacle - and thus were clear and impactful.You did a splendid job with this poem!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021

Thank you so much for this great review. I appreciate it very much. :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry is well=presented, Boogienights. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. The image is perfect as is the color scheme which sets off your words in a great way. Your words are well-chosen and create an great relaxing mood. There's good flow, good use of rhymes, and a great message.
Thanks for participating.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review...it really means a lot to me. :)