Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

It is something. I am glad Hank and Bert are on this case and see right through the lies. I can't wait for the next read. This is really good. I am so enjoying reading this.

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

thanks, Barbara - I'm actually really enjoying and getting into the story too. sometimes I just write, but this one is touching me in ways I didn't anticipate... hope I can get it written like how I feel it.

Thanks again Smiles, Carol

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is a good read from beginning to end. You moved your story along beautifully.
There is one sentence that may warrant a second look.

"Yeah, Hank and I were discussing it the same thing."

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

Thank you! Glad you are continuing to follow and I'm super glad that you are enjoying it. fixed the problem with that "it" - Thanks!
Smiles to you - Carol

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Page 6 of the Mystery and Crime Fiction in continuation the subsequent event thru nice taletelling, progresses thru forward plot development, fostered by dramatic characters and realistic dialogues; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

I appreciate that you are taking the time to follow my story and to offer reviews. That is so kind of you. Smiles - Carol

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I'm glad she has Hank to work with her, he sounds like one of the nicer characters in this story. He's hot, too, spotting that young lad. But which one was it? Ethan or Tyson? Now they have to trace him. Things are looking up, I hope!! Well done, Carol, excellent writing as usual. :)) Sandra xxx

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

Oh I am so glad you had a chance to read this. i wasn't sure if I could find a way to bring Hank into this story, but I think it went smoothly (I hope). So much to add and so much to write. Hope all is well with you. Thanks as always....you make me feel so good. Smiles, Carol

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 31-Mar-2021

You're very welcome, I'm enjoying your story. :))

reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

You might not like the next chapter so hang on tight....I'm working on it! It's scaring me and I'm writing it. LOL

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 31-Mar-2021

Ok, I've just been writing a love scene, and I'm smiling!! Lol.

reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

Oh boy - love scenes are happy places...Can't wait!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I believe that all things will come out in the wash. And Dwight Cuthbertson will be be found out for he is, a violent abuser. Hank certainly agrees with Bert, that Dwight put on an acting performance of his life, and that something quite definitely sticks in Denmark. An excellent episode Carol, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

Thanks, Roy - I appreciate your kindness and following the story. So much is going to happen to all of them, unfortunately. Thanks for reading and the review. Smiles to you - Carol

reply by royowen on 31-Mar-2021

Well done

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

All for publicity, in front of the TV cameras the guilty becomes innocent ..."depending on how the light falls on." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

Thank you for stopping by Iza. Hope you are following along, because it's just begun. So much more is going to happen. Thanks again - Smiles to you, Carol

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hooray! Hank is on the job! Boy if this were a TV series, I would have said the introduction was really long to get our main character on the set. I liked how you showed us the overacting Dwight does and how Nancy can hardly contain her glee. Great job!

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021

Thank you, Helen. - They will get their come uppance...maybe not as soon as we would like ... but it will happen. Glad you enjoyed it! Smiles to you!