October Sun
Remembering autumn76 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A well written poem, expressing the fall (October), winter (Snowy owl) and upcoming spring (Spring flair). I think we need to think spring and watch the many flairs which nature provides.
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A well written poem, expressing the fall (October), winter (Snowy owl) and upcoming spring (Spring flair). I think we need to think spring and watch the many flairs which nature provides.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you Rosemary for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This is lovely and autumn/fall is one of my very favorite times of year. You have an eloquent way of writing that grabs the reader and entices them to reach and savor every single word! Love it! Perfection!
Wendy
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This is lovely and autumn/fall is one of my very favorite times of year. You have an eloquent way of writing that grabs the reader and entices them to reach and savor every single word! Love it! Perfection!
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you Wendy for your thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your encouraging comments and extra special sixth star.
Blessings
Janet
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YOU are very welcome and highly deserving!
Wendy
Comment from mauial
Great writing here. I loved your imagary of a beautiful autumn sunset. We got to experience the east coast autumn colors a few years ago and it was an awesome sight to see.
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Great writing here. I loved your imagary of a beautiful autumn sunset. We got to experience the east coast autumn colors a few years ago and it was an awesome sight to see.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you mauial for your thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your encouraging comments and extra special sixth star.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I enjoyed reading this descriptively calm poem late at night. It incorporates the senses of sight, sound, and touch, and even the word 'musty' could be a reference to how the old leaves smell. But my favorite line was: reverberating echoes on the edge of night.
Nice job.
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I enjoyed reading this descriptively calm poem late at night. It incorporates the senses of sight, sound, and touch, and even the word 'musty' could be a reference to how the old leaves smell. But my favorite line was: reverberating echoes on the edge of night.
Nice job.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your encouraging comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from pome lover
that is excellent!
You are a talented wordsmith. Beautiful, flowing, intelligent words.
You should frame that or put it in a journal - something to keep.
I think I will print it. I wish I had your name to type under it. I have a few things that Fanstorians have written that I thought were especially good in a folder, to re-read, occasionally.
Thanks for the pleasure!
Katharine - pome lover
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that is excellent!
You are a talented wordsmith. Beautiful, flowing, intelligent words.
You should frame that or put it in a journal - something to keep.
I think I will print it. I wish I had your name to type under it. I have a few things that Fanstorians have written that I thought were especially good in a folder, to re-read, occasionally.
Thanks for the pleasure!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you Katharine for your thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your encouraging comments and extra special sixth star.
What a wonderful compliment to wish to print my poem.. My name is Janet Foor.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
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well, It doesn't copy well. Have you tried it? But I did. It wouldn't let me copy your picture, so found a pretty October scene with sun light. Thanks, again, Janet
Katharine
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'October Sun', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is a six, but I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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'October Sun', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is a six, but I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you duchess for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your thought that this is worthy of a six..
Blessings
Janet
Janet you're welcome and I would dearly loved to have had six.
Blessings,
the Duchess
Comment from Mrs. KT
Such a beautiful rendering, Janet, filled with distinct visual and emotive imagery.
I so love autumn; it's my favorite season next to spring, summer, and winter. :)
You describe autumn in northern Michigan perfectly! Much enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Such a beautiful rendering, Janet, filled with distinct visual and emotive imagery.
I so love autumn; it's my favorite season next to spring, summer, and winter. :)
You describe autumn in northern Michigan perfectly! Much enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Diane for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I understand your sentiment. I try to enjoy the season we are in - today it is bitter cold here but the sun is shining and the sky is blue. what's not to like :))))
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Raul for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Ann Market
The strong imagery you created is lovely! Each word you chose to describe the scene around yourself is vivid and colorful. I enjoyed this very much, and I could clearly see the scene!!
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The strong imagery you created is lovely! Each word you chose to describe the scene around yourself is vivid and colorful. I enjoyed this very much, and I could clearly see the scene!!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you Ann for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem in excellent in every respect--skillfully composed and vividly descriptive of scenes of nature in the fall. The season has much charm--but sometimes make us dream of spring.
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This poem in excellent in every respect--skillfully composed and vividly descriptive of scenes of nature in the fall. The season has much charm--but sometimes make us dream of spring.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Janice you for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Janet
