The Diet
kids on diet13 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well done Iza, I have to diet I think, there's too much food for us I'm afraid, and most of it, either too fatty, or too hi carbed, well done Iza, great post, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
Well done Iza, I have to diet I think, there's too much food for us I'm afraid, and most of it, either too fatty, or too hi carbed, well done Iza, great post, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Good catch:) than you
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Well done
Comment from rjuselius
Hahaha. This is an entertaining piece of prose dear anonymous! The end is surprising and rather clever. I enjoyed it very much.
Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
Hahaha. This is an entertaining piece of prose dear anonymous! The end is surprising and rather clever. I enjoyed it very much.
Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much Rebekka for your uplifting review:)
Comment from equestrik
Cute story that so many of us can identify with. I like the comparissons from mice to men. It is a good entry for the contest. All the best to you in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
Cute story that so many of us can identify with. I like the comparissons from mice to men. It is a good entry for the contest. All the best to you in the contest.
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you:)