Comment from Jenny Kartchner

Excellent

This was an outstanding poem. I love how the picture adds to the mood. I also like you saying, 'it must be heard'. Clever and sweet. That's what we have to do...write again.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021

Hi Jenny Thank you for your lovely review snd I enjoyed the challenge of creating this and pleased you liked it
Writing should be fun and not a chore Cheers Christine

Comment from Leann DS

Excellent

I like this poem, and I think it was a good topic for a minute poem. Your rhymes were good and the poem flowed nicely. I enjoyed reading it, and I have the same feelings on the topic. :-) Hugs.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021

Hi Leann Thanks for your review and lovely summary of my poem
I think we all love to write
And I just have too at times
Cheers Christine Hugs back

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Very nice, you sound like you're a well rounded girl. I love to do all that you do, and I also love to read. I really enjoyed your contest entry, best of luck to you. :)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thanks boogienights for reading and reviewing this one and yes have had many vicarious adventures in the armchair
cheers Chris

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job detailing the activities in your life, Chrissy. I enjoyed reading your entry. The art is a good pairing to your words. Those words flow smoothly. Unfortunately, you are missing the required rhyme for the contest. I rate a 5 based on what you wrote in your notes.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Hi Jan Thanks do much Ha ha I have now rewritten this as I failed miserably in writing according to the requirements hopefully this now meets expected rules
Many Cheers And appreciate your great support snd five stars
Chris

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hi Christine! I like how you list all the many things you do in this poem.
Thanks for entering the Minute poem contest. You have all the syllable requirements but you are missing the aabb rhyming requirement. Please see: http://poetrydances.com/minute.php

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Hi Helen Ha Ha yes have missed the mark completely teach me not to read the requirements before writing this never mind I may try to correct
Cheers Chris