Cool Again
a 5-7-516 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I loved these words as the dark frightens us because it blinds our eyes and not seeing means we are vulnerable to danger, a clever write Bill, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Ha ha ha, I loved these words as the dark frightens us because it blinds our eyes and not seeing means we are vulnerable to danger, a clever write Bill, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Wendy G
This made me laugh, because it is just what I would do! But I would not have thought of making it into a poem, so well done. Imaginative and creative.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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This made me laugh, because it is just what I would do! But I would not have thought of making it into a poem, so well done. Imaginative and creative.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Wendy
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup, I have practiced this sport too:) and come on it's not a sin to recognize that you are scared and insecure:"
enter the alley
run like a monster is there
then act cool again" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Yup, I have practiced this sport too:) and come on it's not a sin to recognize that you are scared and insecure:"
enter the alley
run like a monster is there
then act cool again" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Iza
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I suppose this is what kids do in tunnels? I have heard about honking in tunnels, holding one's breath in a tunnel, if you're driving. But running sounds like a good alternative.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Lol. I suppose this is what kids do in tunnels? I have heard about honking in tunnels, holding one's breath in a tunnel, if you're driving. But running sounds like a good alternative.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Used to work for me; now I simply walk with a purpose.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
What's so great about this poem is that you can imagine an array of characters running down this alley. So many scenarios to envision! You create a full playground!
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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What's so great about this poem is that you can imagine an array of characters running down this alley. So many scenarios to envision! You create a full playground!
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks, LHS
Comment from kmoss
Ha. No matter how old we get, some child like fears still grasp up at times! This is a creative 5-7-5 poem and the art suits it perfectly! Well done. Make sure there isn't anything hiding under your bed!
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Ha. No matter how old we get, some child like fears still grasp up at times! This is a creative 5-7-5 poem and the art suits it perfectly! Well done. Make sure there isn't anything hiding under your bed!
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks, kmoss
