Precious things
Things I used to have12 total reviews
Comment from RodG
It is easy to sympathize with the Speaker in this poem who sees in others all the things she used to have such as love and togetherness. I like how you begin and end the poem with ONCE to emphasize her plight. Rod
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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It is easy to sympathize with the Speaker in this poem who sees in others all the things she used to have such as love and togetherness. I like how you begin and end the poem with ONCE to emphasize her plight. Rod
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. Jen
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Precious Things, creates a picture of someone who now sees what was important and what is is easily taken for granted.
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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This free verse, Precious Things, creates a picture of someone who now sees what was important and what is is easily taken for granted.
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks Bill.
