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Heart Cafted Poems - 2020

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Musings of an old man -2020

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem is beautiful just like the image. I enjoyed reading it. Thank YOU for your great 'Christmas card.' Your words create great imagery for this wonderful season. I could see everything you mentioned. The way mom spiked dad's eggnog was hilarious. All the images you included are great ones for Christmas. Thanks for haring.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thanks Jan
Comment from Eternal Muse
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What a joyous, merry and happy poem! The spirit of Christmas is presented well here, with all all those wonderful things that make this holiday truly special.

Great imagery and visuals, I love presentation and artwork.
Happy holidays!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Eternal Muse the very best Holidays to you!
Comment from RetroStarfish
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This is a wonderful poem and a challenging structure. You've really captured the sights, sounds and whimsey of Christmas:"...tree tops twinkling, sparkle..." Well done!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from damommy
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What a lovely message to everyone on FanStory. We have wonderful people on here, and I'm lucky to consider them my friends, as I do you. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas. Your poem reminds me of how Christmas used to be. Things will never be the same after this pandemic, I'm afraid.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Damommy, I hesitate to think that we will never be going back our perspectives of normal again, far too many worldwide losses and still mounting up the. Then there is the debt......ugh.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Yuletide
by JLR

Hello, Jim,

Cool Christmas rictameter poem. It's a collection of Christmas memories. I love this one..."mom busy spiking dad's eggnog," LoL good rictameter form.

Well done! Merry Christmas to you too.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you, see you back in 2021!
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
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I think that you wrote a great Christmas poem. It was a very well written. I like the idea of sugar plum. Which makes me think of Christmas sweets. Mom spiking dads eggnog is funny. Thank you for sharing this entertaining poem! Great poem!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much Jeffrey, best of the holidays see you around FS next year!
Comment from greyson ernst
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i really really like this its good the picture is really pretty to but as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thanks!
Comment from rspoet
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Hello JLR,
An excellent rictamter with wonderful imagery of the Christmas season.
I like mom spiking dad's eggnog. I think we could all use a sip of that.
Happy holidays to you, I've enjoyed reading your poems throughout the year.
Best wishes to all.
Robert


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thanks Robert, see around FS I 2021 be well! Best of holiday wishes to,you and yours.
Comment from robyn corum
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JLR,

How sweet of you! And I like the list of memorable things in your post, too. We each seem to have those special items which appeal the most to us. But I like it ALL. Thanks!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thank him especially for al of your marvelous incite and support this years, you have helped me learn a great deal, Best to you for a robust 2021!
Comment from Julie Sandy
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A Beautiful poem which incorporates all the special moment and magical feeling of Christmas.
Very well written
Thank you for sharing

Happy Christmas

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    The very same to you!