Food Choices
5-7-5 poem about nutrition36 total reviews
Comment from Vanna1
Good poem for kids and even adults to emphasize healthy eating. The rhyme works well. Good presentation. You followed the instructions well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Good poem for kids and even adults to emphasize healthy eating. The rhyme works well. Good presentation. You followed the instructions well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Hi Vanna1: I agree. This poem would make a good educational chant for children. Thank you for your comments, review and evaluation.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, I loved that poem. It was so adorable, with your perfect rhyming and flow, a beautiful artwork and the message. We indeed should chose what we eat and the picture is the perfect example (smile).
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Oh, I loved that poem. It was so adorable, with your perfect rhyming and flow, a beautiful artwork and the message. We indeed should chose what we eat and the picture is the perfect example (smile).
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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I am grateful that such an experienced writer reviewed my poem. Thank you for your encouraging comments, review, and evaluation.
Comment from palmart
Great Poem that brings a direct message on healthy options! You have a recognition and it may surely break another barrier to get the "All Time Best", I identify with the readers that like to have am advise and well, after all, Fruits are always a great Choice!! Great Job!!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Great Poem that brings a direct message on healthy options! You have a recognition and it may surely break another barrier to get the "All Time Best", I identify with the readers that like to have am advise and well, after all, Fruits are always a great Choice!! Great Job!!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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The correct choice of food can heal the body of many ills. I truly appreciate your reading my poem, and appreciate your encouraging comments and review.
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You´re very welcome, Lorraine!!
Thanks for your comments!
Have a Great time!
Blessings!
Comment from Reese Turner
Pardon me if I'm snoring
But the cuisine you tout is really boring
Chips and salsa, just to start
That's good for both head and heart
Enjoying life is the real key
To longer life, at least to me!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Pardon me if I'm snoring
But the cuisine you tout is really boring
Chips and salsa, just to start
That's good for both head and heart
Enjoying life is the real key
To longer life, at least to me!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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A Truer rhyme has never been written. Enjoying life is definitely the key. I agree with and enjoyed your comments that brought a smile to my face. Thanks for stopping by and for your evaluation.
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We are one of mind.
Join me in New Years plan to make promises we might well not keep, but we will enjoy the New Year! Cheers.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a fun poem, a great picture and some good advice. A great contest entry, thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Have a great holiday.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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This is a fun poem, a great picture and some good advice. A great contest entry, thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Have a great holiday.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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I admire your work and feel honored that you read my poem. Thank you for your encouraging review, kind comments, and well wishes.
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That's so kind of you to say...thank you.
Comment from Jay Squires
Hi, Lorraine. Your poem might have been written by my cardiologist. She's been after me to watch the salts and the carbs. And when my salivary glands lust after a Mounds bar, she's right at my side whispering apple in my ear. Good luck, my dear, in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Hi, Lorraine. Your poem might have been written by my cardiologist. She's been after me to watch the salts and the carbs. And when my salivary glands lust after a Mounds bar, she's right at my side whispering apple in my ear. Good luck, my dear, in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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I appreciate your comments, especially coming from a constant contest winner. Thank you for your review and well wishes.
Comment from mermaids
You have created an excellent little poem that is so true. I am trying to eat more fruit. Your 5-7-5 form is excellent and I admire your use of rhyming words. You give good advice in few words.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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You have created an excellent little poem that is so true. I am trying to eat more fruit. Your 5-7-5 form is excellent and I admire your use of rhyming words. You give good advice in few words.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Believe me, I need to listen to the message of my own poem. Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from jusylee72
Very good advice in a poetic menu of thoughts and tastes. Not too salty, not too sweet is my favorite line. Picture is a great illustration. I enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Very good advice in a poetic menu of thoughts and tastes. Not too salty, not too sweet is my favorite line. Picture is a great illustration. I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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I wrote a poem that I need to try a little harder to follow by putting the cookies down. Thank you for your kind review and comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
5-7-5 poem about nutrition
Food Choices
by Lorraine Jackson
Hello, lorraine,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good advice for a good healthy diet.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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5-7-5 poem about nutrition
Food Choices
by Lorraine Jackson
Hello, lorraine,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good advice for a good healthy diet.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose for your encouraging comments and review. I try to eat healthy but sometimes miss the mark. I guess we all do at some point. Thanks for reading my poem and for your generous evaluation.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Words of wisdom. The philosophy of living explained in a few words! As it is said," To eat is a necessity, but to eat intelligently is an art." Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Words of wisdom. The philosophy of living explained in a few words! As it is said," To eat is a necessity, but to eat intelligently is an art." Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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I am so glad you stopped by to read my poem. It is also said, "We should eat to live, not live to eat." Thank you for your kind review and comments. Much appreciated.
