Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "After Wicked Storm"multi-author book number two
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. Totally agree with you. Now we can breath a little freely now. People have spoken and the peace has restored. The whole world is celebrating.
Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
Yes. Totally agree with you. Now we can breath a little freely now. People have spoken and the peace has restored. The whole world is celebrating.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, Lisa, I hope you and your family are doing well.
hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Another good entry for this Renga collaboration! I had earlier reviewed Yvette's 7-7 couplet.
We all like the day after the storm.
For a 2020 triple whammy vignette a la Trump:
get Covid
to be evicted from his house
lose his job (this is the most important one)
Now there is light to be seen with Biden-Harris.
Mark
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
Gypsy,
Another good entry for this Renga collaboration! I had earlier reviewed Yvette's 7-7 couplet.
We all like the day after the storm.
For a 2020 triple whammy vignette a la Trump:
get Covid
to be evicted from his house
lose his job (this is the most important one)
Now there is light to be seen with Biden-Harris.
Mark
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Mark. I appreciate your review.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
after wicked storm
rolled through American Lake --
sunrise broke at dawn
A brutal storm very often gives way to the clearest sunlight imaginable, and when it happens at dawn, it astonishes us.
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
after wicked storm
rolled through American Lake --
sunrise broke at dawn
A brutal storm very often gives way to the clearest sunlight imaginable, and when it happens at dawn, it astonishes us.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Mark. I appreciate your review.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, it was four years of a "wicked storm" and things just got more and more stormy, especially this year. But I celebrate the breaking of a new dawn and Hope in God and peace during this next administration.
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
Yes, it was four years of a "wicked storm" and things just got more and more stormy, especially this year. But I celebrate the breaking of a new dawn and Hope in God and peace during this next administration.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, Helen :)
hugs,
gypsy