Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi Iza. Did you mean to say "sweep those jewels" and let's go?

Pretty good dribble fiction here if you straighten that little thing out to make more sense. Also, Can you replace the "Santa" part with something else? Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020

Thank you so much for your wonderful review:) and also thank you for the suggestion:)

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL!! Wouldn't be the first time someone used the Santa story as a 'cover' for their crimes... Thanx for the original offering, my lady - best of luck! ;) Yvette

those jewelry --> those jewels OR that jewelry

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020

Thank you so much for your wonderful review:) and your top-noch suggestion

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is an excellent dribble flash fiction Iza, an excellent post, just imagine being Father Christmas the chimney sweep, well done dear Iza, good luck My friend, blessings Roy
Suggestion "So, what am I? Santa.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020

Thank you so much for your wonderful review:)

reply by royowen on 06-Nov-2020

Most welcome

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

(So, what I am Santa s/b So what? I am Santa. Santa Burglar! s/b Santa Burglar? Sweep those jewelries s/b sweep that jewelry)

Delightful whimsy! Good luck.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020

Thank you so much Liz, I really appreciate your comments and corrections.

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is a delightful entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest. You got the full story written in just a bare minimum of words. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020

Thank you, my friend:)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm a little confused as to what happened here. But that picture is just too cute! So is he a chimney sweep just having fun or is he really doing the robbing? Best wishes in the contest!

Suggestion:
- So, what I am Santa! (So what? I am Santa!)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020

Hello my friend, the chimney sweep is a perfect excuse for robbery:)

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is witty, cute, and very adorable. I guess that they might be considered cat burglars, huh? You've done a fine job with this humorous and well written work. Well done!

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020

Thank you so much, Mr. Jeffrey:)