Comment from prayingpoet

Excellent

Very nice poem. I think the only slightly negative remark I can make is that it was a wee bit long, but had a lot of depth and strength to it. Thanks!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thanks Janice but we can't help it as the instructions call for 7 of them. Wait antil the Heroic Crown Of Sonnet comes about ... 15 smonnets.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

The dance of life bringing lovers together to enhanced their relationships. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thanks so much Charlie for reading this one and for
your review on it. Awesome.

reply by c_lucas on 27-Oct-2012

You're welcome, Gungalo. Charlie

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

So smiling.