Lake Of Dreams
Crown of Sonnets182 total reviews
Comment from Silverlock
Beautifully composed Crown of Sonnets, Gungalo. Wonderful imagery in each verse, telling the tale of how the lovers share their passion and love, in and around the Lake of Dreams.
Congratulations to you both on a lovely collaboration!
Regards, Barb
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Beautifully composed Crown of Sonnets, Gungalo. Wonderful imagery in each verse, telling the tale of how the lovers share their passion and love, in and around the Lake of Dreams.
Congratulations to you both on a lovely collaboration!
Regards, Barb
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Barb for a wonderful review. You have made your review sound so wonderful.
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Most welcome, Gungalo! :))
Comment from Enrique28
A most enjoyable stream of fine romantic poetry inspired by intense feelings of love, and an acute appreciation of nature. Filled with fine imagery and beautifully presented.
"I see as if the darkness had no eyes,
my world is made of all your endless sighs."
Wonderful food for thought!!!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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A most enjoyable stream of fine romantic poetry inspired by intense feelings of love, and an acute appreciation of nature. Filled with fine imagery and beautifully presented.
"I see as if the darkness had no eyes,
my world is made of all your endless sighs."
Wonderful food for thought!!!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much Enrique for a wonderful review.
Comment from Joannforsberg
Beautiful poem and photo.
Just stay with me beside the lake till dawn,
when steamy mists rise all around and light
swirls 'round as pastels on a canvas drawn,
to watch the colors of the day turn bright.
There lie with me for hours and hold me long
within our bed of flowers each divine
Truly enjoyed, Jo
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Beautiful poem and photo.
Just stay with me beside the lake till dawn,
when steamy mists rise all around and light
swirls 'round as pastels on a canvas drawn,
to watch the colors of the day turn bright.
There lie with me for hours and hold me long
within our bed of flowers each divine
Truly enjoyed, Jo
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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We both thank you for a beautiful review Jo and we're so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Matoshka
OH I wish I had a six for this one. How romantic, utterly in sync with one another. You can see one and the answere. Honestly this is one of the best you've done. Wow what love lies beside this special lake. Blessings and deep sighs...
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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OH I wish I had a six for this one. How romantic, utterly in sync with one another. You can see one and the answere. Honestly this is one of the best you've done. Wow what love lies beside this special lake. Blessings and deep sighs...
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Sigh yes Matoshka we had fun writing this one and it really took no time at all. It's a wonderful write I think that expresses so much. Thanks girl.
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It is so beautiful and it felt so spontaintious for each of you. Could almost see you both at the computer grinning, writing in the nude. LOL Loved it and you.
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Tch tch tch!! LOL I'm laughing my butt off over here you. At the computer in the nude. Heheh.
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So...I am right...caught ya hehehehe your laughing has made me smile so big...love and blessings
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Smiling so much.
Comment from juliedickson55
Lovely sonnets...the theme is flowing over pebbles, tripping like droplets of light, upon the smooth stones.
Good alliteration:
swallows sipped sweet
I love some of your descriptive lines:
"in spangled corners fell"
"my world is made of all your endless sighs'
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Lovely sonnets...the theme is flowing over pebbles, tripping like droplets of light, upon the smooth stones.
Good alliteration:
swallows sipped sweet
I love some of your descriptive lines:
"in spangled corners fell"
"my world is made of all your endless sighs'
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thanks Julie for a wonderful review.
You have chosen well with your phrases.
Comment from marycec
A beautiful crown of sonnets that flowed beautifully thanks to the connecting line .How did you do it, a verse at a time? It seems seamless in the reading.The images are clear and create a pictur e of bliss and tranquility.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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A beautiful crown of sonnets that flowed beautifully thanks to the connecting line .How did you do it, a verse at a time? It seems seamless in the reading.The images are clear and create a pictur e of bliss and tranquility.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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No he wrote one and then I did, Mary. It was very easy and only took a few days that way. No stress. Thanks for a beautiful review.
Comment from rjuselius
BRAVO, this is truly an exceptional piece of poetry! it flows like a river and the imagery is just stunning! if i had six stars..
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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BRAVO, this is truly an exceptional piece of poetry! it flows like a river and the imagery is just stunning! if i had six stars..
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much Rebekka for a fantastic review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! Wish I had a new batch of sixes for this masterpiece! All those perfect sonnets! They aren't easy to do... I know, cuz I've tried. Love how you use the last line to begin the next. My favorite is this, because I know exactly what you mean: My world is made of all your endless sighs,
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Wow! Wish I had a new batch of sixes for this masterpiece! All those perfect sonnets! They aren't easy to do... I know, cuz I've tried. Love how you use the last line to begin the next. My favorite is this, because I know exactly what you mean: My world is made of all your endless sighs,
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thanks Phyll we had fun doing them, that's a fact. Thanks so much for reviewing them for us.
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi Gungalo,
And there above the water's calming swell
we sat and watched the swallows flit and wing
and sipped sweet nectar as the shadows fell
with softest starlight' round us gathering
In purest passion were our spirits wed
beside a lake of dreams we made our bed
What beautiful sonnets and I feel written from the heart. You have painted quiet a picture with your words. It's as though your on some isolated island filled with passion where love blossoms and grows. Beautifully written and a pleasure to have read and reviewed.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Hi Gungalo,
And there above the water's calming swell
we sat and watched the swallows flit and wing
and sipped sweet nectar as the shadows fell
with softest starlight' round us gathering
In purest passion were our spirits wed
beside a lake of dreams we made our bed
What beautiful sonnets and I feel written from the heart. You have painted quiet a picture with your words. It's as though your on some isolated island filled with passion where love blossoms and grows. Beautifully written and a pleasure to have read and reviewed.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you ever so much Mtnspirit. It means a great deal to us to have you read them.
Comment from J. Dark
This is a stunningly gorgeous work that literally gave me tingles reading it. I was daunted when I see the length but when I started reading I really did not want it to end. This is a joyous and glorious poem that you should be extremely proud of. Ignore the bland five star rating which was the maximum I could award. This work goes well above the rating system - it is sublime and awesome. Totally love it!
Mrs D :-)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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This is a stunningly gorgeous work that literally gave me tingles reading it. I was daunted when I see the length but when I started reading I really did not want it to end. This is a joyous and glorious poem that you should be extremely proud of. Ignore the bland five star rating which was the maximum I could award. This work goes well above the rating system - it is sublime and awesome. Totally love it!
Mrs D :-)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Sigh thank you so much Mrs D. We had fun writing it and ove being able to post it here for all to read. Really appreciate your review.
