Clarity
contemplative quatrains152 total reviews
Comment from rod007
As usual you enter the child's mind well as he debates all the mysteries of life and cannot find answers. As you say so eloquently, 'clarity won't call.' As adults I think we're also sometimes immersed in a thick fog, but God comes to lift us out of it. Well done, Brooke.
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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As usual you enter the child's mind well as he debates all the mysteries of life and cannot find answers. As you say so eloquently, 'clarity won't call.' As adults I think we're also sometimes immersed in a thick fog, but God comes to lift us out of it. Well done, Brooke.
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Rod, for your thoughtful reading of this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from granny goes viral
Isn't that the darn truth tho'?
The poem is lively, the meter sings
The message universal, but still it stings.
Good Morning, and why am I up already?
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Isn't that the darn truth tho'?
The poem is lively, the meter sings
The message universal, but still it stings.
Good Morning, and why am I up already?
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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granny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
