Lake Of Dreams
Crown of Sonnets182 total reviews
Comment from Dutchie
Aaah so beautiful this crown of sonnets. You two wrote a masterpiece... Sounds like paradise, this heavenly poem,
wonderful imagination and description. It's the most wonderful poem I ever read. Great job, girl. Fia
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Aaah so beautiful this crown of sonnets. You two wrote a masterpiece... Sounds like paradise, this heavenly poem,
wonderful imagination and description. It's the most wonderful poem I ever read. Great job, girl. Fia
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Ahhh Fia you have made us both extremely happy girl. We wrote this and it came off as being fun. We know that is says more than that. Thank you so very very much.
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You're so welcome Gun, it was wonderful
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Sigh Fia.
Comment from fastdigits
Ah now you have even outdone yourself in
this lake of dreams that your words take us
to in the most gentle and warmest way in
this place of tranquility where all the world
ceases, if but for this one night, where all that
is heard is the whisper of endless sighs.
Well done
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Ah now you have even outdone yourself in
this lake of dreams that your words take us
to in the most gentle and warmest way in
this place of tranquility where all the world
ceases, if but for this one night, where all that
is heard is the whisper of endless sighs.
Well done
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much from the both of us Fastdigits. This was fun to do and we enjoyed it very much.
Comment from Sasha
This is beyond beautiful. It is one of your best. How lovely to write something with another poet. I assume you wrote one stanza and he the next and so on. This is definitely a keeper. Absolutely superb!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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This is beyond beautiful. It is one of your best. How lovely to write something with another poet. I assume you wrote one stanza and he the next and so on. This is definitely a keeper. Absolutely superb!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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No Sasha, he wrote one sonnet and I the next and so on. Boy was it fun too. Thanks so very much girl for an awesome review.
Comment from artemis53
Beautiful, just plain beautiful. So gentle and honey sweet. What a very lovely write, Gungalo. The adoration is so real. "I cry for joy when e'er you ride the winds to me you came and let the music play;" Love it!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Beautiful, just plain beautiful. So gentle and honey sweet. What a very lovely write, Gungalo. The adoration is so real. "I cry for joy when e'er you ride the winds to me you came and let the music play;" Love it!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Hey thank you so much girl. We had fun writing this one. Excellent review from you.
Comment from MumEsGirl
Wow, I am impressed. I struggle to form even one sonnet. Lovely words, romantic, peaceful almost idyllic.
I love the format with the last line of each poem creating the first line of the next
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Wow, I am impressed. I struggle to form even one sonnet. Lovely words, romantic, peaceful almost idyllic.
I love the format with the last line of each poem creating the first line of the next
hugs
kate
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Hey Kate, we thank you so very much for a
splendid review of this one.
Comment from Gloria ....
Gungalo and Nathan what a lovely labour of love. A crown of sonnets, my land. It is divine. I knew I was saving my last six star for something, and this is it! You have most poetically, and in sublime form I must also add, taken us through the magical, powerful, transformative journey and endless eternity of pure love between a man and a woman.
All the senses heightened as the lovers' positive energy, rises, frolicks, rejoices, flows everywhere then returns to replenish in the lake to begin the cycle again -- as natural as rain.
Beautiful.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Gungalo and Nathan what a lovely labour of love. A crown of sonnets, my land. It is divine. I knew I was saving my last six star for something, and this is it! You have most poetically, and in sublime form I must also add, taken us through the magical, powerful, transformative journey and endless eternity of pure love between a man and a woman.
All the senses heightened as the lovers' positive energy, rises, frolicks, rejoices, flows everywhere then returns to replenish in the lake to begin the cycle again -- as natural as rain.
Beautiful.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Emmex you have made our day. What a totally wonderful review. Sigh it is beautiful.
Comment from cvcopac
Each and every sonnet is filled with beautiful imagery and sentiment; the ambition, energy, and creativeness to create seven such sonnets is an exceptional feat in itself. Salute to you and your partner. cvc
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Each and every sonnet is filled with beautiful imagery and sentiment; the ambition, energy, and creativeness to create seven such sonnets is an exceptional feat in itself. Salute to you and your partner. cvc
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Such a wonder in your words CVC an a gorgeous review. Thank you so much.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is absolutely beautiful to read. You both did a wonderful job writing this together. A sonnet must be hard to write, but you did it perfectly.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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This is absolutely beautiful to read. You both did a wonderful job writing this together. A sonnet must be hard to write, but you did it perfectly.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Actually Barbara this was fairly way for us. We enjoyed doing it that's for sure. THanks so much for liking it.
Comment from Amsterdam
I liked it, because its
#1 hard to do
#2 differs for you
#3 cause it talked to me
But #4
I personally would like the (sex) parts out
Two people~ don't have to have sex
To fully connect
As a matter of fact
Sometimes~ Sex is why they never will connect
Just my un Edjamacated thoughts
I do like it
I know....
Smile
Am
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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I liked it, because its
#1 hard to do
#2 differs for you
#3 cause it talked to me
But #4
I personally would like the (sex) parts out
Two people~ don't have to have sex
To fully connect
As a matter of fact
Sometimes~ Sex is why they never will connect
Just my un Edjamacated thoughts
I do like it
I know....
Smile
Am
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thanks Am but it stays. LOL. That's the way it was written.
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I would never say change to you~
:)
Am
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Smile then.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written my friend a love story unfolding through the poem using this complex form it is very beautiful well done I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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This is very well written my friend a love story unfolding through the poem using this complex form it is very beautiful well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you Jill for a review that says it all.
