Comment from lynglyng

Excellent

Great poem! I enjoyed the message that you delivered so well with your descriptive words and excellent imagery. I think that you did a great job with this poem and I saw nothing that I would change about it. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

lynglyng, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

We were given the privilege of free agency and it is up to every individual to decide his own destiny, but not misuse the right. Excellent message and rhyming. Smooth and enjoyable read. Faye

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

Thank you so much, Faye, for your insightful response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from Finglas

Excellent

Well done. I like the question posed and solution hinted at in the final line. Life is ours to live yet sometimes I find we are content sitting in the bench waiting for the coach to put us in the game. The truth is we are our own coaches.

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

Finglas, thank you for your thoughtful reading of this poem :-) Brooke