Rain is Falling
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Comment from RodG
Just this afternoon I was talking to my wife about our garden and how it changed dramatically because of one profuse rain. I like to think your "magic wizards" we're at work, Brooke.
Like how we experience the showers as they increase and then end. Fun toseewhat the worms and then the dandelions appear. A delightful poem young readers would love. I did! Rod
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Just this afternoon I was talking to my wife about our garden and how it changed dramatically because of one profuse rain. I like to think your "magic wizards" we're at work, Brooke.
Like how we experience the showers as they increase and then end. Fun toseewhat the worms and then the dandelions appear. A delightful poem young readers would love. I did! Rod
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Rod, thanks so much - I'm so glad this resonated with your own experience :-) Brooke
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Brooke,
Good poem and nice presentation for the contest.
I'm not sure why it is that all one has to do is mention rain, and automatically one feels peace and tranquility. Hmmmm?
Enjoyed the read. Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Good poem and nice presentation for the contest.
I'm not sure why it is that all one has to do is mention rain, and automatically one feels peace and tranquility. Hmmmm?
Enjoyed the read. Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Jax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Angel Debbie
If this don't make a child smile I don't know what will!!
Magic Wizards how cool is that. You sure have a special way of wording things so moothly that they flow perfect.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful write of poetic art!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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If this don't make a child smile I don't know what will!!
Magic Wizards how cool is that. You sure have a special way of wording things so moothly that they flow perfect.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful write of poetic art!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks so very much, Angel Debbie. I so appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brooke - Nine great stanzas that should make any child smile - especially Sawyer. I think you have him in mind when you write these poems. Good rhyming couplets throughout and a thoroughly good read. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke - Nine great stanzas that should make any child smile - especially Sawyer. I think you have him in mind when you write these poems. Good rhyming couplets throughout and a thoroughly good read. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Dorothy - yep, I just sent his mother a message on Facebook telling her I just wrote him another poem :-) Brooke
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Ah! I thought so. Regarding our last 'talk; I need to mention that no matter how many grandchildren you have and love the first always holds a special place in your heart. That's what I have found. D x
Comment from JM
I think I will use this delightful and fun poem to play a numbers game with my grandson. Poor kid hasn't seen rain in a long time. But we do have weeds!!! Love your write.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I think I will use this delightful and fun poem to play a numbers game with my grandson. Poor kid hasn't seen rain in a long time. But we do have weeds!!! Love your write.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, JM - yep, my grandson hasn't seen rain either, not in a long time :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
Yesterday (I know this well)
worms were here while raindrops fell.
Now there's gold and they are gone --
wizards surely made this lawn.
This is PRECIOUS......Brooke
I loved it
God bless
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Yesterday (I know this well)
worms were here while raindrops fell.
Now there's gold and they are gone --
wizards surely made this lawn.
This is PRECIOUS......Brooke
I loved it
God bless
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Jenny, thank you so much for your generous sixth star and gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
I love your take on when children smile, another delightful gem, these would be great for children in children's books Brooke, your rhyming and rhythmic meter were great, it was wonderful to read and recite, is pleasure, yet again, blessings, Roy.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I love your take on when children smile, another delightful gem, these would be great for children in children's books Brooke, your rhyming and rhythmic meter were great, it was wonderful to read and recite, is pleasure, yet again, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Roy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is a great poem for little children learning their numbers. Kids love rhyming poems because they can learn them and repeat them by heart. I think this one will work well for that. Nice work, Brooke.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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This is a great poem for little children learning their numbers. Kids love rhyming poems because they can learn them and repeat them by heart. I think this one will work well for that. Nice work, Brooke.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Drew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from NightWriter
Rain is Falling is another outstanding and perfectly written set of rhyming quatrains. Bravo! Good timing too as some places have been seeing lots of rain. Perfect all the way through.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Rain is Falling is another outstanding and perfectly written set of rhyming quatrains. Bravo! Good timing too as some places have been seeing lots of rain. Perfect all the way through.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Steve, thank you so much for your generous sixth star. I had such a good time writing this :-) Brooke
