If Heaven Ever Visits Earth
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6169 total reviews
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Brooke,
I like the simple wish you make in this colorful write. Although, the word "behest" suggests it is more of a command. But, why not? Ask, and ye shall receive, correct? Beautiful work, with this excellently rhymed thought of Heaven meets Earth. Have a great weekend, Bill
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
Hello Brooke,
I like the simple wish you make in this colorful write. Although, the word "behest" suggests it is more of a command. But, why not? Ask, and ye shall receive, correct? Beautiful work, with this excellently rhymed thought of Heaven meets Earth. Have a great weekend, Bill
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Bill :-) Brooke
Comment from Carole Rosa
Brooke, This is my personal favorite poem for today. My kitchen is sunflower décor. I love the photo art. I wish I could frame it. Poetic talents and unlimited artistry abilities flow through your veins every day. How very beautiful..... Carole
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
Brooke, This is my personal favorite poem for today. My kitchen is sunflower décor. I love the photo art. I wish I could frame it. Poetic talents and unlimited artistry abilities flow through your veins every day. How very beautiful..... Carole
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Carole, I am pleased with this poem, so I am thrilled you like it too :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
I think your image of a heaven full of beauty and a kaleidoscope of butterflies is a great image. According to N T Wright, former Bishop of Durham, heaven co-exists with Earth but is 'visible' to us only imperfectly and briefly in key moments and events.
Patrick
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
Hi Brooke,
I think your image of a heaven full of beauty and a kaleidoscope of butterflies is a great image. According to N T Wright, former Bishop of Durham, heaven co-exists with Earth but is 'visible' to us only imperfectly and briefly in key moments and events.
Patrick
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Patrick, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I loved this, I'm quite a fan of this style especially when it's as great as this one I loved the sentiment behind this poem it really makes you feel something, a great poem, well done,
Andrew
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
I loved this, I'm quite a fan of this style especially when it's as great as this one I loved the sentiment behind this poem it really makes you feel something, a great poem, well done,
Andrew
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
What an excellent poem , love the style and the repetition
sounds great when read aloud. Yes Brooke, heaven visits all the time earth
and leaves many treasures like Sawyer... ;:--). Pili
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
What an excellent poem , love the style and the repetition
sounds great when read aloud. Yes Brooke, heaven visits all the time earth
and leaves many treasures like Sawyer... ;:--). Pili
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Pili, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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You very welcome... Pili
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: lovely writing and sentiment. It is certainly a wonder of nature or Heaven, to see butterflies fly by in an ever changing array of colors. Such a delicate creature and such a delicate poem. Linda
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
Brooke: lovely writing and sentiment. It is certainly a wonder of nature or Heaven, to see butterflies fly by in an ever changing array of colors. Such a delicate creature and such a delicate poem. Linda
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Acquired Taste
Yet another lovely addition to your work Brooke.
kaleidoscopes of butterflies - such a lovely and very visual phrase - I can envision them now, fluttering gently on my lawn. Nicely done.
Jean
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
Yet another lovely addition to your work Brooke.
kaleidoscopes of butterflies - such a lovely and very visual phrase - I can envision them now, fluttering gently on my lawn. Nicely done.
Jean
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Jean, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kaila Mari
Well written poem. Rhythmical lines flow from beginning to end. Picture art enhances the imagery of the message. Sunflower and butterflies have an idealistic effect on the poem. Good job; God bless!
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
Well written poem. Rhythmical lines flow from beginning to end. Picture art enhances the imagery of the message. Sunflower and butterflies have an idealistic effect on the poem. Good job; God bless!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Kaila Mari, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from me_tudor
Brooke, you are on a roll with your poetry. I swear you get better all the time. This was yet another fantastic poem. I truly enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
Brooke, you are on a roll with your poetry. I swear you get better all the time. This was yet another fantastic poem. I truly enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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me_tudor, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very imaginative piece! I didn't know that a herd/flock/bunch of butterflies is called a kaleidoscope... and it certainly is appropriate. :)
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
Very imaginative piece! I didn't know that a herd/flock/bunch of butterflies is called a kaleidoscope... and it certainly is appropriate. :)
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Phyllis, thank you so much :-) I didn't know either until I Googled it after starting the poem, and I was delighted to find out it was not something prosaic like a herd :-) Brooke