Comment from Terror2s

Excellent

Your author notes really added a lot to the impact of this poem. My knowledge of wine is limited, but I am familiar with fine china and good food so the implication was apparent. Excellent job! T2

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thanks. I liked your review very much.

Comment from stanishmichelle

Excellent

Your author notes are informative and interesting as your lovely poem. The words are so effective in meaning. Reading the poem makes me want a glass of wine myself. I enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thanks, Michelle. Glad you liked it. :)

Comment from teresa.b

Excellent

Good poem. Great visualization. I have that Wedgewood plate so I could appreciate it even more. Your author notes were also helpful. Nice.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thanks.

Comment from Mari_

Excellent

Nice.

I'll have a glass of the wine you're making. lol

No actually you have painted a beautiful picture with words. Even the colors you chose against the font is beautiful.

Great job. Good luck.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thanks.

Comment from miss joyce

Excellent

Acquiring the level of perfection in any and all things is,
in essence a vintage product. Lovely imagery and describes for me that when we excel at what we do then we ourselves are as fine wine!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thanks.

reply by miss joyce on 15-Jun-2011

My pleasure!

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

oo a real fruity poem here and i loved it so many visions from so few wonderfull words thank you so much for sharing it gazzagodbod

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thanks. That was a real good review.

Comment from MrBoTie

Excellent

A nice 5-7-5 poem. The picture you paint with your words is enticing and the descriptive elemente promise a wine that will be a renown vintage. Not only are the grapes the best but the china (workmanship) is the best therefore pointing to a "best" vintage. Even just the grapes and the plate would make for an interesting still life painting. good job!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thank you, MrBoTie. Yes, the grapes and the plate would make a great still life - if we can get the purity of the white and the translucence of the green.

Comment from Xylok

Excellent

sounds educational and inviting and delicious and natural yet technological to me. cool poem! interesting field and study and practice and very eloquent verbiage! superb author's notes.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thank you, Xylok. I think the Author's Notes helped a great deal. Very 'educational' and 'inviting' - is right!!

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

Vintage it is, the haiku and the creativity within the three lines, so easy to picture because of your excellent author notes, great entry, good luck.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thanks, Ameen. It is a vintage haiku! :)

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

Hi, Author, I know grapes, I know Wedgewood, and now I know Savignon Blanc as well. Thanks to your 5-7-5 poem and author notes that besides giving info, also points out the difference between nature and art, and the combination of art, elegance and good taste. Good job ...

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thanks, Belinda. Glad you know Wedgwood and grapes. And hope you enjoy Savignon Blanc as well. :)