Ezekiel Had Half a Smile
quatrains in 8/6/8/6 pure whimsy163 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
That half smile looks like it is about to open up to a whole smile so watch out! Love the picture, Brooke :) Love the poem and always I wonder where you get your wonderful ideas for writing such engaging messages. I know your inspiration is Sawyer. We all benefit from your bright outlook on the world.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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That half smile looks like it is about to open up to a whole smile so watch out! Love the picture, Brooke :) Love the poem and always I wonder where you get your wonderful ideas for writing such engaging messages. I know your inspiration is Sawyer. We all benefit from your bright outlook on the world.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Joy, thank you so much :-) Yep, he is the inspiration. I just stare at a bunch of photos Miranda posts until one spurs a thought :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Awesome...................................................................................if I could only get by with one word, it would have to be this one. :-) Carolyn
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Awesome...................................................................................if I could only get by with one word, it would have to be this one. :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Carolyn, thank you so very much for your adorable review and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from words
Another stunner, Brooke, but the site has limited my stars again.
I do love Sawyer's half smile... It's better than so many fake-but-full smiles I have seen lately.
Love your Sawyer series. It makes great reading to my own grand kids. Hugs, d
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Another stunner, Brooke, but the site has limited my stars again.
I do love Sawyer's half smile... It's better than so many fake-but-full smiles I have seen lately.
Love your Sawyer series. It makes great reading to my own grand kids. Hugs, d
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Thanks so very much, Diane :-) His half smile melts my heart each and every time - there's such a shy sweetness to it :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the smile that lights your heart. he looks like such a little gentleman in this picture
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the smile that lights your heart. he looks like such a little gentleman in this picture
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent and delightful to read. I got a full smile out of this one. The rhythm and rhyme are great and the picture of Sawyer and his smiling face is a great choice for this poem.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Excellent and delightful to read. I got a full smile out of this one. The rhythm and rhyme are great and the picture of Sawyer and his smiling face is a great choice for this poem.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Titanx9
Brooke, that picture has got to be one of the cutest pictures of your grandson that I've seen. He is absolutely adorable! I would give a day's salary to know the thoughts roaming around in his mind, though I don't know whether I'd want to be the recipient of whatever "little boy's" machination that's brewing - LOL.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Brooke, that picture has got to be one of the cutest pictures of your grandson that I've seen. He is absolutely adorable! I would give a day's salary to know the thoughts roaming around in his mind, though I don't know whether I'd want to be the recipient of whatever "little boy's" machination that's brewing - LOL.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Titan, thank you so much :-) I would pay dearly to know what he is thinking too :-) He's talking more and more, so soon he will just tell us. LOL Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
AWWWWWWWW!!! If this isn't the cutest poem, with the cutest darn picture, I don't know what is!!! This is SO sweet - I just LOVE it! Look at that face as you read the verse - Brooke, you could melt an ice burg with this - absolutely adorable! Gosh, I am SUCH a fan of yours! This poem reminds me so much of my childhood! I don't remember when or how, I just remember hearing poems lie this one and loving them. I'll bet Sawyer is going to have many, many precious memories of such things!
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AWWWWWWWW!!! If this isn't the cutest poem, with the cutest darn picture, I don't know what is!!! This is SO sweet - I just LOVE it! Look at that face as you read the verse - Brooke, you could melt an ice burg with this - absolutely adorable! Gosh, I am SUCH a fan of yours! This poem reminds me so much of my childhood! I don't remember when or how, I just remember hearing poems lie this one and loving them. I'll bet Sawyer is going to have many, many precious memories of such things!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Dawn, thank you so very much :-) You've left me with a smile, my friend. Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Easy to see why you like the expression, it is full of fun and a touch of mischief. Nicely expressed in the poem.
Patrick
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Easy to see why you like the expression, it is full of fun and a touch of mischief. Nicely expressed in the poem.
Patrick
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Patrick, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from hobopoet
If you haven't thought of it, you should totally put together a book of children's poems. You clearly have a knack for that kind of sing-song writing (helped along by the wonderful meter you employ).
Very nicely written. I enjoyed this. :)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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If you haven't thought of it, you should totally put together a book of children's poems. You clearly have a knack for that kind of sing-song writing (helped along by the wonderful meter you employ).
Very nicely written. I enjoyed this. :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
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hobopoet, thank you for your encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
Caught him just right Brooke. Great poem and good wording. The little fellow seems to be growing. It shows some in his appearance. Thanks for bighting my day. Shalom
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Caught him just right Brooke. Great poem and good wording. The little fellow seems to be growing. It shows some in his appearance. Thanks for bighting my day. Shalom
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Ben, thank you so much :-) Brooke
