Lake Of Dreams
Crown of Sonnets182 total reviews
Comment from Deorre Leonard
This is a beautiful creative expressive piece. It has a good flow the presentation is good. My favorite part is I feel a surge of passion yet unscoffed. Well done. Deorre
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This is a beautiful creative expressive piece. It has a good flow the presentation is good. My favorite part is I feel a surge of passion yet unscoffed. Well done. Deorre
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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We thank you so much Deorre for a wonderful review
of this one.
Comment from Janet Foor
I loved reading your crown of sonnets linked beautifully with clarity and strength in each one. The artwork was amazing and gave an added pleasure to the read. Lovely rhyme and meter and great alliteration. Bravo to your both.
Best wishes, Janet
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I loved reading your crown of sonnets linked beautifully with clarity and strength in each one. The artwork was amazing and gave an added pleasure to the read. Lovely rhyme and meter and great alliteration. Bravo to your both.
Best wishes, Janet
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
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We thank you for an awesome review Janet and
the best wishes.
Comment from uniqueauthor
Lovely indeed. I have never seen a crown sonnet before. This provided a good lesson for me, although one English sonnet is quite enough for me. I liked the way each sonnet if connected by the last verse of the previous couplet.I enjoyed the read. Linda
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Lovely indeed. I have never seen a crown sonnet before. This provided a good lesson for me, although one English sonnet is quite enough for me. I liked the way each sonnet if connected by the last verse of the previous couplet.I enjoyed the read. Linda
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much Linda for an awesome review.
Nathan and I wish to personally thank you
for your beautiful review of it.
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You're welcome. Peace for today.
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Smile.
Comment from Ed2039
OK, I've never seen that before, linked sonnets. Intricate and interesting and a good write. Nice work and seems quite a bit of it to contrive that weave. Thnx Gungalo ed
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OK, I've never seen that before, linked sonnets. Intricate and interesting and a good write. Nice work and seems quite a bit of it to contrive that weave. Thnx Gungalo ed
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thanks Ed so very much from Nathan and I. Your review is awesome and yeah, it takes a little bit of finagling.
Comment from donaldww
I loved reading your crown of sonnets, with its line linking and iambic meter.
I flew as a swallow beside your lake of dreams, cresting the clear waters, watching you dance in garlands and lace.
I revelled in pleasures and felt a surge of passion, tangle and entwined in a carousel of rainbows and feathers.
Cheers,
DW
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I loved reading your crown of sonnets, with its line linking and iambic meter.
I flew as a swallow beside your lake of dreams, cresting the clear waters, watching you dance in garlands and lace.
I revelled in pleasures and felt a surge of passion, tangle and entwined in a carousel of rainbows and feathers.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
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Sigh DW. you make us both sigh guy. What a wonderful review this one is. Thank you so very much.
Comment from mtrybak
The artwork is stunning and the words are beautiful. I love how you illustrated an all encompassing physical and emotional connection with such beautiful words. I remember having to study Shakespear's Sonnet's and not understanding it all. I understand this perfectly and "get it". A job well done!
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The artwork is stunning and the words are beautiful. I love how you illustrated an all encompassing physical and emotional connection with such beautiful words. I remember having to study Shakespear's Sonnet's and not understanding it all. I understand this perfectly and "get it". A job well done!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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What a wonderful thing to tell us Mtrybak. Nathan and I thank you for your review. It's amazing but they were really easy to write and we had fun.
Comment from Brian Terry
This is so wonderful.
Every stanza gave me goose bumps
crown of sonnets?is that a recognised format or is it your own.
Bit worried about Nathan are you being unfaithful to me?
for shame.
The six is not enough I think you have surpassed yourself with this
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This is so wonderful.
Every stanza gave me goose bumps
crown of sonnets?is that a recognised format or is it your own.
Bit worried about Nathan are you being unfaithful to me?
for shame.
The six is not enough I think you have surpassed yourself with this
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thanks Terry from the two of us. Really you left an amazing review. Crown of Sonnets is a recognized format. THe next is a Heroic Crown of Sonnets which is comprised of 15 sonnets. Don't be worried about Nathan, he'll share. LOL. Thanks again so very much,
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Gungalo and Nathan
how nice a poetesses and a poet can
share their thoughts writing a crown of Sonnets
They reminds me of the sonnets that Elizabeth Browning wrote to her Robert.
Thank you for sharing your talent(s)
Gert
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Hello Gungalo and Nathan
how nice a poetesses and a poet can
share their thoughts writing a crown of Sonnets
They reminds me of the sonnets that Elizabeth Browning wrote to her Robert.
Thank you for sharing your talent(s)
Gert
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
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We thank you very very much Gert and are thankful you waited a day to give us a six. It's not unline Elizabeth's poems at all. Again, that you so much.
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You are welcome folks.
Gert
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Smile and smile.
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nice very nice.
Gert
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Sigh thanks Gert.
Comment from Littlegirl38732
I think this is the most beautiful thing I have ever read. I love the rhyme scheme, but most of all, I love the descriptiveness of it. I feel like I am in a serene paradise while reading it! I enjoyed it very much
thank you so much for sharing.
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I think this is the most beautiful thing I have ever read. I love the rhyme scheme, but most of all, I love the descriptiveness of it. I feel like I am in a serene paradise while reading it! I enjoyed it very much
thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Littlegirl for a delightful review.
Comment from Jaq Cee
Wonderful piece of writing Gungalo. Floats right off the screen at you. Rhyme, rhytm, flow all great. I especially like this...
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Just stay with me beside the lake till dawn,
when steamy mists rise all around and light
swirls 'round as pastels on a canvas drawn,
to watch the colors of the day turn bright"
It would have been a 6 from me, but I have none for now. :) Jaq x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Wonderful piece of writing Gungalo. Floats right off the screen at you. Rhyme, rhytm, flow all great. I especially like this...
"
Just stay with me beside the lake till dawn,
when steamy mists rise all around and light
swirls 'round as pastels on a canvas drawn,
to watch the colors of the day turn bright"
It would have been a 6 from me, but I have none for now. :) Jaq x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much Jaq for a lovely review.
