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Sauvignon Blanc Grapes

Artistic Photo in 'Still Life' style

200 total reviews 
Comment from Mike K2
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I enjoyed this well written poem and like how it was put together, with a nicely described image for the reader. I also like you notes.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thanks,Mike.
Comment from carmen vargas
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Hayku showing beautiful white wine grapes. Very successful technical and expressive. Beautiful pictures. Congratulations and blessings tomprato.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thank you, Carmen. Blessings to you too, gracious Argentinian lady.
Comment from volcomfury
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I love wine, and this poem made me want a glass. Very careful and powerful word selection, made this poem work really really well. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thanks. I am extremely encouraged by your review.
Comment from poetbear
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I can smell it and taste because of the imagery and metaphor.
I am back in the vineyards in Sonoma thanks to you.
Great write that makes sense.
A must read for its technique.
Get this to the Food Network or Fod and Wine magazine!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thank you, Poetbear. Thank you very much. :)
Comment from Jen Gentry
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Very descriptive poem you created a visual image and made my mouth water LOL It takes a gifted writer to really put an image in ones head with out a lot of fanfare great write.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thanks, Christa. Appreciate that.
Comment from Amicus
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Strong imagery that conveys a sense of elegance and good taste succinctly and in a pleasant smooth flowing manner.
I like the little poem a lot...good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thank you, Arnicus. Appreciate your comments.
Comment from Swtdreamz
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Green translucent grapes- sounds delicious already! I <3 grapes, and the green, slightly tart ones are good too! Addicting even!

On a pure white Wedgwood plate
Sauvignon vintage - sounds rich and flavor and something I'd like to have with either dessert or something light.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thanks, Sweetdreamz. Yes, they are delicious. Glad you liked the poem.
Comment from pickthorn
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A delightful Haiku that expresses the benifits of geen grapes that are used to make the great wine called Savignon Blanc. Those spirits must be very tasty. Great write.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thanks, Pickthorn. Glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Scarlettdreams
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Love this. Just love it. I could visualize easily the intended picture and it was perfect. The message beautiful. Well done. Bravo

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thanks, Scarlett.
Comment from c_lucas
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Your Author's notes are very interesting. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
    Thanks, Lucas.
reply by c_lucas on 16-Jun-2011
    You're welcome, Charlie