Comment from poetbear

Excellent

Great photo.
They are supposed to be lucky so if they come in,I try to take them outside.
This is a magical in touch with nature poem.
Reads well and flows well.
Make sense.
Many will relate.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014

Maddy, thank you :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

reply by poetbear on 19-Jun-2014

Reminds me of my nephew when he was little.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

I love ladybug poems. This one is delightful. You found a great picture to go with it,I like the even flow and rhythm here. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014

Thanks so much, RYME4U :-) Brooke

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

You should put these children's poem together in a book for them to read. You are such a good poetic artist for children as well as adults. You have a knack for writing positive thoughts that just make a person feel better. That's a gift you have. Thank you sharing your poetic genius with us all... John

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014

Thank you, John, for your encouragement :-) Brooke

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hey Brooke,

There is lady bug slot machine at a casino I got to, and I just love when all her dots pay off in a nice way!! ('-')

I like your poem as well! Something tells me that Sawyer has fun with them.

Cheers &
Keep Smilin'... Jax

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014

Jax, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a wonderfully fun poem Brooke. As a child, I loved finding ladybugs. They seem like such a happy kind of bug:) Your poem too is happy.
Teresa

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014

Thanks so much, Teresa. I've always been in love with these little bugs :-) Brooke

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Exceptional

This is a delightful poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. It makes a fantastic contrast to the depressing one I just read, although that had its good points as well. Thank you for lifting my spirits.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014

Thank you so much, Tomes, for your generous and encouraging response to my whimsical poem :-) Brooke

reply by Tomes Johnston on 19-Jun-2014

It was lovely