O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from drivenbackward
I might be way off here, but sometimes the reader takes something different away from the writing than the writer does. What I got from it: Why should the reaper leave just because harvest season was short lived. There are poets and flowers to enjoy.
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I might be way off here, but sometimes the reader takes something different away from the writing than the writer does. What I got from it: Why should the reaper leave just because harvest season was short lived. There are poets and flowers to enjoy.
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from mhk
Alcreator, a haiku (yours in perfect in syllable and other counts) is a tough canvas to paint a vivid picture. You've done admirably well! I reminds me how quickly summer's bounty is whisked away. Very nice.
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Alcreator, a haiku (yours in perfect in syllable and other counts) is a tough canvas to paint a vivid picture. You've done admirably well! I reminds me how quickly summer's bounty is whisked away. Very nice.
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from Swtdreamz
o harvest reaper!
stay short after heat and rain?
poets, flowers bloom! - WOW this collection is short...but sweet
harvest usually in fall right?
inspiration is like flower in bloom-
good job
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o harvest reaper!
stay short after heat and rain?
poets, flowers bloom! - WOW this collection is short...but sweet
harvest usually in fall right?
inspiration is like flower in bloom-
good job
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from KING SLATON
A very fine job here. Your Haiku has the proper syllable count and structured format as well as the topic and clarity to the work. Excellent job.
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A very fine job here. Your Haiku has the proper syllable count and structured format as well as the topic and clarity to the work. Excellent job.
Comment Written 30-May-2006
Comment from MikeSamford
Haiku it is and it speaks to me that the dry spell is over yet damage is done to the crops, and they will make but not as much and the harvest will be a weak one as in poetry.
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Haiku it is and it speaks to me that the dry spell is over yet damage is done to the crops, and they will make but not as much and the harvest will be a weak one as in poetry.
Comment Written 30-May-2006
Comment from orozco123
I am not as articulated as you and will try my best to give you this review. Your reviews of my work make me smile. I love this because so many Haiku's I read do not make much sense to me, but yours do. I am always grateful to be able to read your work it always leaves me thinking about how truly beautiful words can be.
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I am not as articulated as you and will try my best to give you this review. Your reviews of my work make me smile. I love this because so many Haiku's I read do not make much sense to me, but yours do. I am always grateful to be able to read your work it always leaves me thinking about how truly beautiful words can be.
Comment Written 30-May-2006
Comment from sharon fallis
A very nce haiku you have written here. All the counts are proper and the context is wonderful. Good word usage, visuald and great imagery. Thank you for sharing. Sharon
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A very nce haiku you have written here. All the counts are proper and the context is wonderful. Good word usage, visuald and great imagery. Thank you for sharing. Sharon
Comment Written 30-May-2006
Comment from Showboat
Super duper.
Talk about short and sweet. Kind of reminds me of
'flash prose' where less said is better.
You did a great job of that with this one,
Gayle
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Super duper.
Talk about short and sweet. Kind of reminds me of
'flash prose' where less said is better.
You did a great job of that with this one,
Gayle
Comment Written 30-May-2006
Comment from proudgranny
Great Job with this one! I really enjoy reading your poems. You give such great insight into different things in such a profound way. Great Job Again!
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Great Job with this one! I really enjoy reading your poems. You give such great insight into different things in such a profound way. Great Job Again!
Comment Written 30-May-2006
Comment from JoDavison
I like this haiku alot. I love the idea of poets blooming like flowers, and the cry to the harvest reaper is a great attention demanding first line. Well done
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I like this haiku alot. I love the idea of poets blooming like flowers, and the cry to the harvest reaper is a great attention demanding first line. Well done
Comment Written 30-May-2006
