O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece contains a powerful message. The message is clear and understandable. The passion of the writer is felt as the writer taps into the emotions of the reader.
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This piece contains a powerful message. The message is clear and understandable. The passion of the writer is felt as the writer taps into the emotions of the reader.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from Rondeno
Are the flood waters which kill people and sweep their homes away speaking God's glow? Or do we select the evidence to suit our argument?
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Are the flood waters which kill people and sweep their homes away speaking God's glow? Or do we select the evidence to suit our argument?
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from Indie Skreet
this is okay, but i have seen haiku's of a better worded but similar message, so I don't think this is particularly original, now if you had written mute the lord ......... Indie
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this is okay, but i have seen haiku's of a better worded but similar message, so I don't think this is particularly original, now if you had written mute the lord ......... Indie
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from Kingsland
This short poem relates a very good message in its few words. Raindrops are a single word not separate. I enjoyed partaking of this excellent poetic thought transference... John
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This short poem relates a very good message in its few words. Raindrops are a single word not separate. I enjoyed partaking of this excellent poetic thought transference... John
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from hollydee
I think I am going to have to get you to coach me in haiku poetry. I want to be able to do this! Very nicely done, as have been all of them.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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I think I am going to have to get you to coach me in haiku poetry. I want to be able to do this! Very nicely done, as have been all of them.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THIS APPRECIATE REVIEW.
Comment from Nomadic
Didn't they drop the bomb on Japan for writing poetry like this? Or, was that just an excuse to test out something very human? Whatever, I'm sure God approved, seeing she produced the inspiration. My advice is this, why not write from your heart, in a language that the people you are trying to inspire can understand. If you have wisdom, use it. Wisdom is useless if no one knows what you're talking about...
"I'm a 'chiling out' student" is no excuse.
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Didn't they drop the bomb on Japan for writing poetry like this? Or, was that just an excuse to test out something very human? Whatever, I'm sure God approved, seeing she produced the inspiration. My advice is this, why not write from your heart, in a language that the people you are trying to inspire can understand. If you have wisdom, use it. Wisdom is useless if no one knows what you're talking about...
"I'm a 'chiling out' student" is no excuse.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from drivenbackward
Interesting piece once again. I tried to dissect this line by line. The first line is very interesting to me because rain is usually associated with a somber mood and you were referring to HIS glow. Gift lives, move HIS ceaseless blow. This one was difficult for me. The gift of life and Earth? HE continues to provide life for all things without pause? Muse HIM mute, sounds easy, but a little confused on meaning. Round message flow, is this referring to the Earth and the message HE spreads across the world? I enjoy reading your work. I find it challenging and I often feel like I'm trying to unravel a mysterious puzzle.
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Interesting piece once again. I tried to dissect this line by line. The first line is very interesting to me because rain is usually associated with a somber mood and you were referring to HIS glow. Gift lives, move HIS ceaseless blow. This one was difficult for me. The gift of life and Earth? HE continues to provide life for all things without pause? Muse HIM mute, sounds easy, but a little confused on meaning. Round message flow, is this referring to the Earth and the message HE spreads across the world? I enjoy reading your work. I find it challenging and I often feel like I'm trying to unravel a mysterious puzzle.
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from mhk
How true: Muse Him mute; round message flow.
Rain, like all season's blessings, are a gift from God.
Very nicely put. Reminds me that the rainy season is coming to Florida. God has been especially generous with rain in these parts. *g*
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How true: Muse Him mute; round message flow.
Rain, like all season's blessings, are a gift from God.
Very nicely put. Reminds me that the rainy season is coming to Florida. God has been especially generous with rain in these parts. *g*
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from saachi
This is the first haiku I have read and its absolutely beautiful.Thanks for introducing it to me.I truly believe less is more.The message is very strong .
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This is the first haiku I have read and its absolutely beautiful.Thanks for introducing it to me.I truly believe less is more.The message is very strong .
Comment Written 30-May-2006
Comment from Sassybaby
I like this haiku! It is truly great. I like the meaning and the words that are used for it. The visuals were fantastic and the structure was wonderful. I really like how this was put together.
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I like this haiku! It is truly great. I like the meaning and the words that are used for it. The visuals were fantastic and the structure was wonderful. I really like how this was put together.
Comment Written 30-May-2006
