Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good Royowen A nice vacation poem, have a wonderful time and watch your backs out there. thanks for the share and have a great vacation

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks William, for your great review, and lovely thoughts, see you when I get back, blessings. Roy

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

I love fun Aussie abbreviations, Roy, and 'rellies' is up with the best of them. :-)

Hey, talking about 'the wrong way round', in your notes, how about cricket where if say the score in 100 runs for two wickets, you lot call the score, 'two for a hundred', when of course it should be, 'one hundred for two'. ;-)

'scribe some classics...(a tropic's bard,)' - I found this line a bit 'jumpy', and you also start with an emphasised syllable to break the pattern of the otherwise iambic meter, which is excellent throughout.

Top rhymes too.

Great fun details of your upcoming jaunt. Have a great time.

Cheers, Ray.

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks, for your empathy and great review they are appreciated,and the holiday wishes blessings, Roy

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

hehe my family and I are going to Bali in September for 2 weeks! I have only been there once surfing but its very crowded with locals and tourists in the water. Are you taking your board Roy? lol
Relatives= relos lol well that's the slang I'm used to calling the relatives.
Enjoyed your write as always

dip

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 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

I don't board, Dip, my wife does a bit, my son in law hails from Bali, so my beautiful little granddaughter is half Indonesian, we've been there quite a few times, this time we're going to Java for about a week, no tourists over there. Thanks for the great review Dip, blessings Roy