Mama Tries to Pin the Blame
two wildly wildly modified triolets125 total reviews
Comment from costellsgirl33
My boss has the exact same hairstyle, lol! Although his hair, in my opinion, is too long for a mohawk, he still gels it up everyday and comes to work like that.
Sawyer is adorable, but my boss on the otherhand.....not so much ;)
This is a sweet and light-hearted poem and I really enjoyed it. It made me laugh and smile.
Clearly your job has been done
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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My boss has the exact same hairstyle, lol! Although his hair, in my opinion, is too long for a mohawk, he still gels it up everyday and comes to work like that.
Sawyer is adorable, but my boss on the otherhand.....not so much ;)
This is a sweet and light-hearted poem and I really enjoyed it. It made me laugh and smile.
Clearly your job has been done
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, costellsgirl :-) Glad to hear this look works better on my grandson than on your boss. LOL :-) Brooke
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Hahaha, you are very welcome, Brooke! I can't take my boss serious with that hair ;)
CG :)
Comment from Alan K Pease
A warm sense of humour is your grandson who would be pleased to see what his mother has created for children at his age respond to things which make them different.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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A warm sense of humour is your grandson who would be pleased to see what his mother has created for children at his age respond to things which make them different.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Alan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Nosha17
One day, he'll ask, 'was that the latest hairdo?' He looks very cute! Cute rhyming and poetic style which is most fitting to the wording. Most enjoyable as always. Faye
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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One day, he'll ask, 'was that the latest hairdo?' He looks very cute! Cute rhyming and poetic style which is most fitting to the wording. Most enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Faye - either that or he'll ask his mom and me what in the heck we were thinking. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
He's cutie that is for sure - gelled and naked or combed and clothed:) Great modified double triolet poem Brooke.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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He's cutie that is for sure - gelled and naked or combed and clothed:) Great modified double triolet poem Brooke.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rama devi
Hee hee--that is an adorable photo and certainly makes the whole world laugh but in the most innocent way. Charming write from Sawyer's POV. Especially found this part tickling:
T'was Mama who gelled up my hair,
then snapped me naked in the bath.
Without a stitch of clothes to wear,
I shuddered when she gelled my hair,
poor me with every part stripped bare
(and folks think mine's a primrose path).
Great rhyme, meter and flow. Nice presentation. Fine alliteration (etc.) here and there
Chuckling...
rd
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Hee hee--that is an adorable photo and certainly makes the whole world laugh but in the most innocent way. Charming write from Sawyer's POV. Especially found this part tickling:
T'was Mama who gelled up my hair,
then snapped me naked in the bath.
Without a stitch of clothes to wear,
I shuddered when she gelled my hair,
poor me with every part stripped bare
(and folks think mine's a primrose path).
Great rhyme, meter and flow. Nice presentation. Fine alliteration (etc.) here and there
Chuckling...
rd
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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rd, glad this elicited a chuckle from you - thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
OK Brooke, I know what Sawyer is thinking...LOL...the hair wasn't enough....pictures????LOL...I think we all get does goofy pictures of the kids in the tub..LOL...and your poem is perfect...I love this...very well done...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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OK Brooke, I know what Sawyer is thinking...LOL...the hair wasn't enough....pictures????LOL...I think we all get does goofy pictures of the kids in the tub..LOL...and your poem is perfect...I love this...very well done...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) It's a wonder any of our kids still speak to us. Brooke
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LOL....you think ????LOL...your so welcome....and have a great day...luff
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so funny, Brooke! Loved it, the photo, (you'll be in trouble when he knows you've shown the whole world, LOL) and the words are superb, I just had to laugh, bless him! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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That is so funny, Brooke! Loved it, the photo, (you'll be in trouble when he knows you've shown the whole world, LOL) and the words are superb, I just had to laugh, bless him! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Sandra, thanks so much. The day will come ten years or so from now when Miranda and I have to hide a whole lot of photos and poems from him for a while so that he doesn't hate us for embarrassing him. LOL I appreciate your generous sixth star. :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
Tis as plain as the nose on my face
Or better yet, me hair out of place
Mama desires to bring disgrace
To this baby's bath time space
Like Really! Can't she understand
I'm growing into a handsome man
That needs his dignity in tact
And that folks is just plain facts
Well done with your modified triolets... I'm through now, Buck
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Tis as plain as the nose on my face
Or better yet, me hair out of place
Mama desires to bring disgrace
To this baby's bath time space
Like Really! Can't she understand
I'm growing into a handsome man
That needs his dignity in tact
And that folks is just plain facts
Well done with your modified triolets... I'm through now, Buck
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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What a hilarious poetic response to my poem - thank you so very much, Buck :-) Brooke
Comment from stanishmichelle
"(and folks think mine's a primrose path)."
I admire Sawyer for the sacrifice he has constantly made to let scores of readers like myself get smiles and joy from the poems like this beautiful endearing one you have written. xx Michelle
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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"(and folks think mine's a primrose path)."
I admire Sawyer for the sacrifice he has constantly made to let scores of readers like myself get smiles and joy from the poems like this beautiful endearing one you have written. xx Michelle
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Michelle, thank you for the laugh and for your review :-) Brooke
Comment from Bobby Jo
Laughing, I am. Very cute, and of course it's not the child's fault for being so darn cute and innocent. This put a smile on my face.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Laughing, I am. Very cute, and of course it's not the child's fault for being so darn cute and innocent. This put a smile on my face.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Bobby Jo :-) Brooke
