You Are Being Watched
Happy living Protect and keep safe 202 words A Non-Fiction122 total reviews
Comment from firdousy
Ya! Good advice conveyed through this non-fiction..It was like our elders were making us
beaware of the evil.
The non-fiction was short and to the point.
But at the very starting point of this non fiction
you said "you are being watched..."
who is watching us? Did you mean to say God or anybody else?
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Ya! Good advice conveyed through this non-fiction..It was like our elders were making us
beaware of the evil.
The non-fiction was short and to the point.
But at the very starting point of this non fiction
you said "you are being watched..."
who is watching us? Did you mean to say God or anybody else?
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Rondeno
As always, I like the verbal energy of your prose. However, this rather paranoid piece does not sit well with your Christian openness and willingness to trust all.
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As always, I like the verbal energy of your prose. However, this rather paranoid piece does not sit well with your Christian openness and willingness to trust all.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Titan Black
That's deep! You did your thing. And I don't
Doubt, that this should have been a contest
winner. Your poetic alliteration was on time.
Keep writing.
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That's deep! You did your thing. And I don't
Doubt, that this should have been a contest
winner. Your poetic alliteration was on time.
Keep writing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi Alcreator Litt Dear,
Life is precious and almost impossible to live in complete privacy unless one lives completely off the grid. Every movement we make, from our births to our deaths are noted and monitored.
A book you may like that's along similar lines of your article: 1984 by George Orwell.
Thanks for sharing.
Bye
Rosalyne
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Hi Alcreator Litt Dear,
Life is precious and almost impossible to live in complete privacy unless one lives completely off the grid. Every movement we make, from our births to our deaths are noted and monitored.
A book you may like that's along similar lines of your article: 1984 by George Orwell.
Thanks for sharing.
Bye
Rosalyne
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Rmocruz
Your writing has presented valid advise indeed.
It is somewhat ambiguous as to who is watching, so
I will use my own interpretation. The government is
illegally monitoring our private messages.
Great job overall.
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Your writing has presented valid advise indeed.
It is somewhat ambiguous as to who is watching, so
I will use my own interpretation. The government is
illegally monitoring our private messages.
Great job overall.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Dean Kuch
An ode' to the Big Bother Theory. How...interesting.
The Big Brother theory is that eventually, government will be enough in control, with propaganda and subliminal messaging, to control an entire society of people. It's the idea that these people can all be bent to the will of a made up man who is said to be their big brother, a loving caretaker. It could happen, I guess, but it'd take years and years, a slow, slow process of manipulation and changing views. So sure, it could happen. Communism did, and Big Brother is just an extreme form of it.
For more than two years, a handful of Democrats on the Senate intelligence committee have warned that the government is secretly interpreting its surveillance powers under the Patriot Act in a way that would be alarming if the public -- or even others in Congress -- knew about it.
Two of those senators -- Ron Wyden of Oregon and Mark Udall of Colorado -- went further. They said a top-secret intelligence operation that is based on that secret legal theory is not as crucial to national security as executive branch officials have maintained.
So, who is telling the truth here?
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An ode' to the Big Bother Theory. How...interesting.
The Big Brother theory is that eventually, government will be enough in control, with propaganda and subliminal messaging, to control an entire society of people. It's the idea that these people can all be bent to the will of a made up man who is said to be their big brother, a loving caretaker. It could happen, I guess, but it'd take years and years, a slow, slow process of manipulation and changing views. So sure, it could happen. Communism did, and Big Brother is just an extreme form of it.
For more than two years, a handful of Democrats on the Senate intelligence committee have warned that the government is secretly interpreting its surveillance powers under the Patriot Act in a way that would be alarming if the public -- or even others in Congress -- knew about it.
Two of those senators -- Ron Wyden of Oregon and Mark Udall of Colorado -- went further. They said a top-secret intelligence operation that is based on that secret legal theory is not as crucial to national security as executive branch officials have maintained.
So, who is telling the truth here?
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from elchupakabra
I really enjoy the message here, this is great advice, especially on the road as you so eloquently put it in your last line. The only thing I disagreed with was trusting others to protect your own wealth. I'm a firm believer in two things. Yin and yang teaches us there is a little evil in all good men, and Stone Cold Steve Austin teaches us DTA. Since that's a matter of personal opinion though, it doesn't affect that I really like this little work. Excellent job.
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I really enjoy the message here, this is great advice, especially on the road as you so eloquently put it in your last line. The only thing I disagreed with was trusting others to protect your own wealth. I'm a firm believer in two things. Yin and yang teaches us there is a little evil in all good men, and Stone Cold Steve Austin teaches us DTA. Since that's a matter of personal opinion though, it doesn't affect that I really like this little work. Excellent job.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Acually pretty good prose describing the perils of existence in a modern society under big brother's little sister's eye. Actually not too different from yesterday's small scale societies where your business was everybody's business. Sounds a little paranoid.
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Acually pretty good prose describing the perils of existence in a modern society under big brother's little sister's eye. Actually not too different from yesterday's small scale societies where your business was everybody's business. Sounds a little paranoid.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from ccmwriter
Interesting. Was not sure what you meant by "Don't keep your gold on road." This has a hint of mystery and maybe even hidden meaning. I, personally, don't want to live my life in paranoia.
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Interesting. Was not sure what you meant by "Don't keep your gold on road." This has a hint of mystery and maybe even hidden meaning. I, personally, don't want to live my life in paranoia.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Leineco
It may have been intended, but I have to say, this feels a little paranoid...and over stated. Is it tongue in cheek and I missed it?
Protect and keep everything or everybody safe and secured. Take no risk - this sounds like a prescription for insanity! Not to mention conscription. There must be room somewhere for frivolity!
And just out of curiosity..what does Don't keep your gold on road. mean?
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It may have been intended, but I have to say, this feels a little paranoid...and over stated. Is it tongue in cheek and I missed it?
Protect and keep everything or everybody safe and secured. Take no risk - this sounds like a prescription for insanity! Not to mention conscription. There must be room somewhere for frivolity!
And just out of curiosity..what does Don't keep your gold on road. mean?
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
